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Loved or feared I dont 'need-ya-shit
Like 'hitting boards with smarts' my punches 'key-ya-wits'.../
Critics 'Destruct-my-lines', 'Obstruct-my-rhymes', Like 'Workers in thoughts' you still can't 'Construct-my-mind'.../
I 'shadow in night' Like 'Covering-these-Destructers', I'm like 'blocking sex' the way I 'Smother-these-Fuckers'.../
'Disable the spines' like 'Out-placing-backs', Call me 'whack'?, Like 'Lessons in thruth' These critics will soon be 'Now-facing-facts'.../
Im not 'weak' unless you 'miscommnuicate whack and ill', Like 'Night crawling down your shirt' I leave 'Critics-backs-in-chills'.../
f*ck you if you think my lyrics are just 'Playing-games', 'Betraying
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First Time I Rhymed..in mah Own mah Mind! Mah Lyrics Shyned../
But Destructive Criticism! left me ‘Assed Out’ like a ‘Sharp-Kick-in-the-Behind’../
Had mah Pen-and-Book! The Whole World Shook! Of what I Verbally Lay../
Cats Dissin Mah Game! Showin me Pain! Cuz they say I needed Multis and Wordplay../
I Tried their style! None the Less it just wasn’t what I like to Speak..Fight the Peace../
But they Fight-mah-Piece!! So now all mah Raps can do is Take the Pain and Write-To-Ease../
Mah Heart Broken and Sore!! It Burned mah Insides till It Decay’d Mah Pores../
So Now mah ‘Gun-Shootin-Buzzer Beaters’ cuz I’m bout to ‘Even-the-Score’../
Destructive Criticism is a ‘b^ch’! It Took mah Dreams and Ruin’d-Mah-Life../
Thinkin!! Why am I Movin-wit-Knives..like ‘Sexin Oranges’! When I see these Boys I’m ‘Doin-The-Slice’../
Now mah Tips-Bend’em..when all I wanted was for there ears wit mah Spits-In’Em../
Take theirs and mah Own Life! B-Cuz of Destructive Criticism../
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