Mind Theory (0-0) vs. mystik11 (2-0)
 

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Topic...
In my shoes

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if u walk in my shoes, youll have conversations with ur feet/
ive been thru tough times and in my shoes i conquered defeat/
represents the pain i went thru every time i walked on concrete/
my past i dont accept in my life, if i could those memories i would delete/
its been tough, its been rough, and yes ive had enough/
from sufferin' with my hands in cuffs, to trading blows to niggaz thinking they strong as a truck/
u say u wanna walk in my shoes, u wanna experience my pain/
i dont have know home, to me everyday it seems to rain/
im lookin up at the sky, but still i dont ask why/
i dont have that much time, so quickly ill drop this rhyme/
no time for hesitation, its either death or its life/
u walk in my shoes, we'll see if u go left or youll go right/
u betta be ready to bomb first, even if the pain gets worse/
walkin in my shoes will have u wishin u woulda died at birth/
im gonna let u feel my struggle, let u feel my fight/
im gonna let u see thru my soul, and walk as a villain at night/

As I walk this path traveled, unraveled through time
A glance at the past battled straight rattled my mind
Head shook from previous chapters closed like books
So I move straight ahead like rooks, at the future I chose to look
I've witnessed good situations go bad
from diaper rash to toe tag, it's a journey so sad
Would it bother you to see a life lie before your side
What if you saw your father die . . . right before your eyes
I've been there, I've done that,
I've seen pain, my head rang like gunclaps
Would you really want walk a mile within my shoes?
You may be able to stomach hurt . . . but why would you want to?
In my shoes, its a race between sin or truth
In my shoes, the situation is win or lose

Imagine a mile in my shoes . . .

Imagine . . .










Good Battle. Uppin for votes.

vote= mind theory
his was more emotional....he seem to make me open my mind and heart and say wow

"Would it bother you to see a life lie before your side
What if you saw your father die . . . right before your eyes"

most emotional part.....

vote mind theory cuz it was better.......not really feeling like quotin and explainin.....whateva............................. .............1


























keep it gay mind....

both verses were short and it seemed a little rushed...

still Mind Theory's was obviously the better, stonger verse

Vote Mind Theory

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