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Mad Man 05-31-03 01:38 AM

Mind Theory (0-0) vs. mystik11 (2-0)
 
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Topic...
In my shoes

mystik11 05-31-03 05:10 PM

im in................................................ ...............
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Soul Theory 06-02-03 10:24 PM

holy shit. i didnt know matchups were up. in................................................ .................

mystik11 06-03-03 10:45 PM

if u walk in my shoes, youll have conversations with ur feet/
ive been thru tough times and in my shoes i conquered defeat/
represents the pain i went thru every time i walked on concrete/
my past i dont accept in my life, if i could those memories i would delete/
its been tough, its been rough, and yes ive had enough/
from sufferin' with my hands in cuffs, to trading blows to niggaz thinking they strong as a truck/
u say u wanna walk in my shoes, u wanna experience my pain/
i dont have know home, to me everyday it seems to rain/
im lookin up at the sky, but still i dont ask why/
i dont have that much time, so quickly ill drop this rhyme/
no time for hesitation, its either death or its life/
u walk in my shoes, we'll see if u go left or youll go right/
u betta be ready to bomb first, even if the pain gets worse/
walkin in my shoes will have u wishin u woulda died at birth/
im gonna let u feel my struggle, let u feel my fight/
im gonna let u see thru my soul, and walk as a villain at night/

Soul Theory 06-04-03 02:55 AM

As I walk this path traveled, unraveled through time
A glance at the past battled straight rattled my mind
Head shook from previous chapters closed like books
So I move straight ahead like rooks, at the future I chose to look
I've witnessed good situations go bad
from diaper rash to toe tag, it's a journey so sad
Would it bother you to see a life lie before your side
What if you saw your father die . . . right before your eyes
I've been there, I've done that,
I've seen pain, my head rang like gunclaps
Would you really want walk a mile within my shoes?
You may be able to stomach hurt . . . but why would you want to?
In my shoes, its a race between sin or truth
In my shoes, the situation is win or lose

Imagine a mile in my shoes . . .

Imagine . . .










Good Battle. Uppin for votes.

Eviley 06-04-03 03:28 AM

vote= mind theory
his was more emotional....he seem to make me open my mind and heart and say wow

"Would it bother you to see a life lie before your side
What if you saw your father die . . . right before your eyes"

most emotional part.....

13th Disciple 06-04-03 02:47 PM

vote mind theory cuz it was better.......not really feeling like quotin and explainin.....whateva............................. .............1


























keep it gay mind....

Evolve 06-04-03 03:04 PM

both verses were short and it seemed a little rushed...

still Mind Theory's was obviously the better, stonger verse

Vote Mind Theory

Soul Theory 06-04-03 10:41 PM

thank you for the votes. uppin/.................................................. .................................................. .......................

mystik11 06-05-03 07:01 PM

uppin 4 votes/.................................................. ...........................
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