My First Spit, Tell what u think
 

first time i spit at dis side/keep the extinguisher next to me in case mic go on fire/911 on redial phone numba/in case they wanna have my shit like they had 99 honda/dog gotta stop sign up in his brain tellin to stop rappin/i got one tellin me neva to stop poppin/u look like corn pops corn flakes rappin/tellin me "gotta have my pops" poppin/ here ur pop pop pop, so thats why i neva stop popin/u get 9 on ur shirt like u tony parker/red bloody shirt look like u got traded to the bulls just for ron harper/so everytime i make a move i eat up the game like im pac-man goin harder/nigga please/get a job at mcdees/so u can make more cheese/that u make gettin down in ur knees/dicksuka/yo don, yo small got hos tellin me u got a dick size of a libary pencil mothafucka/



i know i gotta work harder but tell me

Re: My First Spit, Tell what u think
 

.............wack...................





^^^^.........yea u damn right...........

This was aight for a newbie.....Elevation is needed............U're a female I can understand

i won't say its completely whack. believe me, i was like this when i started. you just have to elevate, stay up and peep my piece Cream 2003

nigga im not a female u faggot

lol i thought it was iight for a femcee!!! j/k... nah dawg we gotta start some where and u can elivate and improve

that was whack nut not completly it started to pick up at the end
but the begining didnt even rhyme