i got claws- B Newz,Spitzo Collabo
 

(B Newz)
i been arrested 5 times for freakin the mic in public places//
drugged and still blazin in the back of cop cars,hittin kids with hot bars//
so that when i smash they face its wax,just like when i smash these tracks//
its dramatic,the way i bust rhymes like automatics,im auto havoc//
so i stay blastin,the asses,of these kats that keep spittin garbage//
B Newz stay bringin the carnage,harmin any kids in arms distance//
im fully armed when spittin, fifty callibre rounds from the mouth harm your vision//
armed to the teeth,i chew on bodies so i guess i carve they defeat//
you are what you eat so ima stay ill,cuz i eat more raw meat than cannibals kill//
i can and will,do anything i god damn choose,so if im sick of you,then bodies gettin removed//
hotties catchin my troops from the underpants navy,that way i stay fuckin up lives till the devil cant save me//



(Spitzophrenic)
Spitzo So Vicious,Takin Out Whole Malitias With Bricks
I'll Slit Ya Wrists,n Hit You So Hard You Have Visions Of Fists
I'll Make You Run Out Of Breath,Than Drive a Stake Through Your Neck
Take a Machette To Your Chest,& Make a Bloody Mess Of Your Head
I Take Lives With Knives When I Slice You From Ya Balls To Your Eyes
Blink Twice,There Goes Your Life,Rip Off Ya Arms n Have Them Diced
Kick You,Smash Yah Head With Bricks Too
Have One Dispute,Put Nails On Tha Ground Than Trip You
Whip You,Im Equiped With a Blazing Samurai Stick
As Blood Drips,I Break Your Shoulder With One Hit
Grab an Arrow Gun I'll Shoot You,Rip Out Your Vocal Box So I Mute You
I Hope For Your Sakes,Tha Colour Blood Red Suits You
Im Gonna Take a Spear,Drive It From Ear To Ear
I'll Slit Your Bitch,& Rip Out Ya Kid From Her Rear
Smash Him,Bash Him,Put Him In a Pot & Mash Him
Wrap Him In a Napkin & Trap Him Like a Spastic
Be Realistic,Give Him a Split Lip,With a Cricket Players Wickets
Rip He's Veins From Heart To Veins Get a Glass Of Hes Blood & Drink It
Im Deadly With Melodys,Like a Piano Vet Killer
Comedys Over Powered By Tragedy,Thats Why Im Big Spitzilla

rofl that pic is hillarious kid.

where the fuck r the replies!?

YEAH SOMETHING IS MISSEN FROM YOUR VERSES THEY LACK METAPHOR STRUCTURE BUT IT WAS WORTH READING

i was not feeling the structure...
couldnt find a flow because of that...
it wasnt bad. better than most of
the herbs that post things on here...
it wasnt great...up the meaning withing
your words...

^just my opinion^

B news...the flow is tight but you need to dig deeper...Spitzophrenic...like your name but you're just plain sick and I don't mean it in a good sense...the blood rhyme is played to me...over all you both need to elevate...but B news you got more potential...peace

up...

^^^