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Kosta 06-01-03 04:38 PM

Fortune Tellers..Sand 'N' Vortex
 
Were the prophets of age,
a union of immortality
Sent to predict the fallacy
that shall befall your galaxy.
Years from now,
a meteorite shall collide with Earth
Mankind will become extinct,
as the oceans subside the world.
Cities will be destroyed
by tyranic waves of Chlorine
as humanity bears witness
to Mother Natures fury.
With the world underwater,
and greenest landscapes eaten,
this shall provide God
with a second shot at his garden of Eden
Mankind messed his world up,
so he figured things needed to change,
Gave monkeys voices,
and placed us bottom of the food chain. .
to learn and master ways
around a new game,
run through shame and hide from
what we previosly killed
its confusing the ways the wont's collide
and intersect god's shallow will,
is it a switch up in plans for the kind of man
that he mangles within his hands,
or is it a plan the kind he always has
that will eventually make the life grand
we try but cant understand,
i tried and only saw lies "oh please god!"
fear trickled like water from every thought
please stop i screamed what the heck is this,
and i slammed the crystal ball to the
concrete letting vision slide into emptiness...

Bash 06-01-03 06:41 PM

This was Ill..........But I didnt see Vortex's verse

Kosta 06-01-03 09:23 PM

It's all mixed together...

Passivist 06-01-03 09:28 PM

ooooooooooooo but it was tight

Maven 06-01-03 11:11 PM

that was really cool...the short lines had me all messed up, it was kinda weird...I liked it though.
The role reversal was good, I've often thought about what it would be like to me killed by a huge mouse.
I'd like to hear an audio of this, it would be dope.
Peace

Baron Mynd. 06-02-03 03:56 AM

^ Should be one to consider when i have CEP figured out.

Nice verse anyways Sand, not a bad collab really given the time you took.

Peace!

Baron Mynd. 06-03-03 10:23 PM

^Upping!

Eviley 06-04-03 04:10 AM

i liked this peice alota

Atetrack define' 06-04-03 05:47 AM

very nicely witten,another good topic form both of you,good likes throughout,the moneky voice ine was good,concrete lettin gvision slid einto emptiness,very nicely ended..nice words from both of you,limking the mixing of verses idea,works well with the right writers...very nicely done,good work both yall...shits a thinker no doubt.

Baron Mynd. 06-04-03 08:03 AM

For the confused. .

Were the prophets of age,
a union of immortality
Sent to predict the fallacy
that shall befall your galaxy.
Years from now,
a meteorite shall collide with Earth
Mankind will become extinct,
as the oceans subside the world.
Cities will be destroyed
by tyranic waves of Chlorine
as humanity bears witness
to Mother Natures fury.
With the world underwater,
and greenest landscapes eaten,
this shall provide God
with a second shot at his garden of Eden
Mankind messed his world up,
so he figured things needed to change,
Gave monkeys voices,
and placed us bottom of the food chain. .

^ It was me up till that point.
Thanks for all the feedback guys, its appreciated!


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