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NuclearConcepts 06-01-03 07:46 PM

[The White Lady Smacked Me] ...written by [YWG]
 
I'm growing a habit.. no one understands it.. rolling with acid ..
I yearn to breathe free..fuck it.. I'm croaking, I've had it ..
I'm knowing I'm stagnant.. I need high.. cuz the lows being savage ..
In the corner of the airport.. hoping they'll lose my emotional baggage ..
I've learned tunes, play the world's smallest violin since I turned loon..
Cloudy images of my future.. blackened and forever gone in a burnt spoon ..
The last dream of a crack fiend.. the damn world is finally past me..
I asked for one last high..and this time the white lady smacked me..

:(

~RuThLEss~ 06-01-03 08:20 PM

^^^^^^^^^^^^^NICE seems more poetic form but nice contend....love the rest but short

Nicr drop FAM

Genetikz 06-01-03 08:22 PM

nice piece true enough well written, but short..... keep spittin

NuclearConcepts 06-01-03 09:03 PM

Word up .. this is about cocaine if you didn't know.

Genetikz 06-01-03 09:06 PM

lol hell i knew and so did every1 else dawg,,, still makes it to short na mean was iight tho

DiverseSyndicate 06-01-03 09:38 PM

this was ill, nice imagery,nice wordplay, it flowed smooth,and nice topic, keep spittin this ill shit.peace kidd

NuclearConcepts 06-01-03 10:33 PM

No Doubt.

C-Section 06-01-03 10:35 PM

this is nice but you should finish it. no since in posting somethign 8 lines long

NuclearConcepts 06-01-03 10:44 PM

Its finished.

Read the last line


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