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[The White Lady Smacked Me] ...written by [YWG]
I'm growing a habit.. no one understands it.. rolling with acid ..
I yearn to breathe free..fuck it.. I'm croaking, I've had it .. I'm knowing I'm stagnant.. I need high.. cuz the lows being savage .. In the corner of the airport.. hoping they'll lose my emotional baggage .. I've learned tunes, play the world's smallest violin since I turned loon.. Cloudy images of my future.. blackened and forever gone in a burnt spoon .. The last dream of a crack fiend.. the damn world is finally past me.. I asked for one last high..and this time the white lady smacked me.. :( |
^^^^^^^^^^^^^NICE seems more poetic form but nice contend....love the rest but short
Nicr drop FAM |
nice piece true enough well written, but short..... keep spittin
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Word up .. this is about cocaine if you didn't know.
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lol hell i knew and so did every1 else dawg,,, still makes it to short na mean was iight tho
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this was ill, nice imagery,nice wordplay, it flowed smooth,and nice topic, keep spittin this ill shit.peace kidd
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No Doubt.
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this is nice but you should finish it. no since in posting somethign 8 lines long
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Its finished.
Read the last line |
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