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S.i. (vs.) CarsonJet
here u go....since u cant set up a simple thread
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yo chek it//...
yo ur ryhmes r fossilized like jurassic eggs, lower reptilian culture// Rippin an tearin u up like a REX,pickin at ya lyrical shred's like a vulture// Heat to intense...ur lines lackin heat protection, weakinin to-a-wither// Try a flo bak wit sum hardcore verse but u creep like a snake, no vertebree,jus sit dere in-a-slither// mechanicly, ur un-able to operate ne machinery wit-out a true emcee-license// Thought ya were flo'in like a caddi in dis battle: way ur lyrics hit-so-silenced// S.I....'seen-it'....yes u did... CJ jus passed u right on by// Spat so hard at u, got yelled at by mom's..."till sum one loses a mother fukin eye!"..// next//.... |
Aight..
Fukk ya kid i escalate ta rape and batter this fake. Ya wack lines like ya sexuality, they'll never be "straight"... Will never be great.. Im testin and blessin this clown. Tha only time ya could "Drop Dope" is in a shakedown... Who great now.. Jus realize i cut lifes like tight ties. See yaself winnin..? Thats only pictured wit closed eyes... I close minds.. As i spit wicked you leaft aquitted. So wack ya could spit liquid durin Christmas and not be "gifted"... -$!- |
carson didnt have any direct punches... neither had personals but SI had wittier and funnier concepts...
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ok...ima let this one slide.....but this was a hater vote indeed...ghost ur new to this sight...when i vote against u in a battle an tell u to stop whining like a bitch theres no need to vote on my battle.......known as pure hate...retaliation......consider urself warned.....uppin
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stfu kid..................i dont do that shit............... I know S.I from another site and wanted to peep his shit... i dont give a fuck about makin your loss count any more...it looks like you do a good enuff job of that anyways....
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I Liked Both, Really I Did, But Ima Have To Give This One To Carson...S.I Had some alright Lines, But Carson Went Deeper, Big Ups To Both Of Ya Though, Although I THink Carson Had The ABillity To Spit Hot Shit All Around The CLock
Ima Give This One To Carson Hit Up http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=52825 For Me , Aight GUys? |
Lets not clogg tha thread wit all yalls bull shit .. CJ if ya got a prollem take it somewhere else .. I know me and Prolly you jus trynna get this battle voted on ...
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yo i read it and couldnt help to say that carson had good word play and killed it but i need votes at http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=52844 honest plz
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Damn man .. we got madd Dick rydin in this bytch .. Might as well have battled nobody cuz it seems like yall aint readin or suttin .. Still upp'n this shit ..
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both were alright but carsons wasnt as good as the verse he posted against me oh well i felt si's flow a lil more.
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ok battle
cant vote cause carsonjet in my crew... ive seen better CarsonJet but i would give it to CJ cause of the wordplay vote=No vote just critiq'n and shit holla! coem poll vote on hte no-show vs. Amend vs. Spiter also come and vote vs. weNOL(active...2-0 me) holla! ************************************************** ************************************************** **** |
i think this one goes to CJ cuz he had nice wordplay but SI had some ill shit too. good battle, yall need a rematch.
vote=CarsonJet could one of yall vote on this, i only need one more vote to KO this bitch(he sucked) http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...0091#post490091 |
Here's a REAL reply...
VOTE=SI
SI...this was nice...nothing really WOW about this verse...I'll commend you on having some kind of noticeable FLOW, know what I'm sayin'???...like I said, the "Dope Drop" was the eye catching line because it was the most unique line in the whole verse..I mean, it could've been used before...because alot of "dope" punches have been used constantly from waaayy back...but to what I recall, I haven't seen the Dope Drop = Shakedown one as of yet..so props on this verse...I can see your on your way to making nice metaphors.. CARSON...wtf@your name...lol...*shakes head*...whatever floats your boat..hmm.. Quote:
I don't know..these lines kinda killed it for me...they seem to sound too basic...I know how you tried to approach it...but these lines made it seem too basic for my likes.. especially this one Quote:
SI was alot more "Straight to the Point", although ONE or TWO of his lines are played.. Keep on working on it...BOTH of y'all.. PEACE |
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