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ReccA 06-01-03 11:34 PM

Life's Rebellion
 
first piece in a while...


Life’s Rebellion

A lifetime of lessons
What have I learned?
Years of hard work
What have I earned?
Nothing but a fact
A bit of intelligence
That all side conversation
Has no relevance
There’s the main idea
All else is a waste
Because somehow, someway
We all leave this place
So I ask you now
What is the purpose?
Why do we bother?
When life seems worthless
I find my reason
When I look to the sky
And cry, “Fuck your system”
I won’t live to die…..


let me know wat u think

ChynaDoll 06-01-03 11:51 PM

thas straight ;).....GhOsT

shiznit 06-02-03 07:24 PM

i think how u structured made the poem really nice to read...

this one would just make u sit and think of life in general and of course the basic questions about it....

i liked this piece..i can relate to it and i think every1 can....but yeah hopin to read more

ReccA 06-02-03 09:13 PM

thanx for the replies....uppin

ReccA 06-04-03 04:04 PM

still sleepin?

a-g 06-04-03 07:55 PM

yeah that shit was really tight nice verse

ReccA 06-06-03 11:28 PM

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