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Life's Rebellion
first piece in a while...
Life’s Rebellion A lifetime of lessons What have I learned? Years of hard work What have I earned? Nothing but a fact A bit of intelligence That all side conversation Has no relevance There’s the main idea All else is a waste Because somehow, someway We all leave this place So I ask you now What is the purpose? Why do we bother? When life seems worthless I find my reason When I look to the sky And cry, “Fuck your system” I won’t live to die….. let me know wat u think |
thas straight ;).....GhOsT
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i think how u structured made the poem really nice to read...
this one would just make u sit and think of life in general and of course the basic questions about it.... i liked this piece..i can relate to it and i think every1 can....but yeah hopin to read more |
thanx for the replies....uppin
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still sleepin?
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yeah that shit was really tight nice verse
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