new freestyle
 

New freestyle, tryin to get better at punches, critics?


My bass hits more violent than tyson,
you betta guard your ears then,
I'm heavy weight tip the richter scale leave the earth quakin,
got you permanentley shakin, like a martini drinkin parkinsin patient,
you're too round to go two rounds with me,
knock you out down for the 1-2-3,
don't roll with crew, I don't need, four-men,
to hit like Foreman,
Don't need to work for Mineke to muffle your rhyme,
I'll do it one word at a time,
I'm out, I'll leave you like dracula's bitch...
goin down for the count.

This was aight,...........you're improoving dawg.......Just keep elevating and U will get better........................Return da favour http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=52756

already did, prolly was upin on you while u were upin on me. Thanx for the feedback.

i see views but no responses, come on where's the love (or hate i guess)

upin

umm freestyles arent aprreciated in this forum......it was alrite i suppose

u need to elivate though

and spit about topics

you lost me with the first punchline...it's not a better way to start off a rhyme...peace