"Deep Dark Secrets" Topical.. Mad Man Peep This!!
 

hey Mad Man... there was some confusion about the due dates last week from my part and some from Bruklors part.... anyway you can open that battle up and see who won based on both verses being posted.... Bruklor said he was cool with it


Dear Mom & Dad:

sorry it had to come to this but i got something to say
i love you both but i have to go, i just can't stay
im going away and i dont think i am coming back
sorry i had to leave this way, please dont over-react
the fact is, i cant take either one of you anymore
at times i think you are both simply evil to the core
i just dont understand what all the hate and anger is for
its like you take pleasure in knocking on the devil's door
you are at odds with the world, always trying to even the score
what makes you think you are so fucking pure!?!?
is it because, your skin is white & lite in pigment??
it aint right to spite others like there just an imagination figment
this is some sick shit... and dont think i dont know about the KKK
your ties w/ the arian nation that you take place in day to day
the guns and ammo you got stored away waiting to spray
all the phone calls and converstaions about how you want to slay
every other race & creed.. whether it be black, jews or gays
and how you cant wait to see there faces when they bleed
i just cant conceive how i could be related as your seed
that is why i have to leave, with the girl i see frequent
O you didnt know!?! thats cause i didnt dare speak it
it was hard not to leak it, but now i dont care... you can peek in
hope you see the love & lust when you peep it
cause i want to hear the disbelief and horror when you shreek it
mad cause you had no idea i could quietly sneek this
and i hope you die when thinking of me licking each of her bodily features
im marrying a beautiful black woman.... I Love My ~ Deep "Dark" Secret~

That was pretty good.
LoL, we both kind of played with the whole "dark" thing, thought that might happen, it worked out well I think.

You and your fucking endings! Pure Dopeness.

Maybe I should have taken that easy win, :P HaHa joking.

LOL... yours was pretty nice too dawg... i now we kinda played the same theme.. and i had mine half done then i read yours and was like fuck!! but i kept going with it anyway... o well.... anyway thanks for the reply.... Peace

This topical was dope Evovle.... I was feeling it from begining to end....


and like he said......

the ending was pure Dopeness...

Fucken nice ish mun haha...Consistent throughout..Def agreed^^ That ending and the way you used the topic title for the twist was dope...Very Creative much respect and Props...Dope....

.......Pz........

I like the ending was off tha chain, I liked it the whole way through

That was really good.......I enjoyed it all................

All feedback is appreciated

i enjoyed and would enjoy the audio somet6ime this was hot

Appreciated

stayed on point,straight forward,keepin it real to how ya feel,good shit dun.1

appreciated