Rapid Fire Rap Satire....
 

rapid fire line satire on random units.//
pandamonium among crews an' clueless users,//
loose-liped mic rusers defused like "tic-tic-boomers".//
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my slick dip manouvers quick like kangaroos-are.//
with a swift punch you loose-yer tooth like decay.//
boost my facade like I belong in a play.//
an actor in this game, blunt's fake like cut cain.//
I'm just luck made, I don't shine like a tucked chain.//
but still I bust main stream like tha mississippi flow.//
leave ya-vision-dizzy raps, crowd be like "yooooo!".//
my accapella solo so slow only so-so.//
add a beat it's more like "ooohhh nooooo!!".//
"how'd he do that", after my set tha rest get boo'd at.//
I'm crooked like a baller with a new-hat,//
jook-ya for a dollar with a 22-stack.//
have you robbed so fast ya-askin' ya-self "who's that?".//
all ya crews wack, La Fam get up an' y'all stand back.//
didn't plan that, I made it my mission ta run this industry.//
I'm a tycoon like this game was monopoly an' I own boardwalk.//
and park-place, hotel on each, as I lay up in a 5 star hotel on tha beach.//
outta-reach lyrics even tha most schooled cats can't reach.//
elementary writers try'n learn but this skill I can't teach//
it's too real, y'all still try'n-ta preech, speak my words.//
leech my verse, goin' thru my trash try'n-a eat my dirt.//
battle'n me there's no return like you lack a reciept.//
rap's descrete, you in-descrete an' not noticed or well know'n.//
by no-one, on stage you chokin' like ya rhyme's frozen.//

do u work at your job? nice rhymes tho lol get back to work!!

fuck that.. why work when I can do what I love.. and get paid.. I'm pro'lly the only one on this site that can say I'm getting paid to write rhymes

you were talking to my boy unreal_1 last night about 15grams = fucking ticket thats messed up wish it was like that down here in the states... right now i am between growers gets gay.... but what is your job exactly?

ummmmm... I'm hte office bitch, whatever they tell me to do I'm supposed to do.. but they never tell me to do anything 'cause I just make myself look busy.. lol

nice, make it look like your keeping shit locked down, when your just wrighting rhymes, and shit. i am trying to set up unreal_1 with some shit so he can colabe wit u on a audio on his comp, but i gotta fix up the mic, but soon and he just needs to wright his part as well, he will kill it tho once he is done he is a very good lyristest not as good as u tho!

okay, if you want to continue this convorsation PM ME!!!! I want feedback..

good flow nice drop liked the multis and wordplay they where ace
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reppin LaFamilia

hmmm, this was ok...nothing spectacular, but a nice read....

LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL DAMN BOY....thats sick i did get paid 4 2 songs i wrote but thats it...lol i didnt continue i wanna use it myself......DAWG Blunt dont sell yo soul for this rap game....lol


Nice drop love the contend and yo it is a reality check to every writers....Man i hate OFFICE SHIT TOO BUT I GOT A KID AND HAVE TO TAKE CARE MY RESPONSOBILITIES SO......OFFICE FOR NOW IS FINE WIT ME...LOL

holla thx 4 feedback

Nice flow
you get paid for raps you make cd's or write for people

I get paid for office work, but I write rhymes instead of doin' my work.. lol..

AHH SO DO I
I work for a phone company 3rd shift
Nobodies there but me
cool huh

this was nice dawg . . 4ReaL
keep postin
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