Vote For First Stanza Of Cypher!!!!
 

Here are the ones you vote for. Remember, the stanza chosen will start of this poetic cypher. That will end up into piece. Give a constructive reason to why you chose the one you chose.


A
The bronze skin becomes pale in darkness
Ears become soft from never wanting to hark this
A warning to the soul to escape from exclusion
And to be like them, but it's an illusion


B
images of grandeur cloud my focus,
swamin like locus, to devour my goals/
as if my eyes cried my blood on tha page
exhailin my life thru tha pen, inhailin tha day...


C
Injecting time into veins of justice
Beauty leaks tears at model's/criterion's mercy
As pulses race from raging vultures
So sink souls of waining/growing masses


Vote! And remember to give a constructive reason to why you chose the one you chose.

Okay, i'll get the ball rolling.

I vote for this one.

A
The bronze skin becomes pale in darkness
Ears become soft from never wanting to hark this
A warning to the soul to escape from exclusion
And to be like them, but it's an illusion


Come on people, VOTE!!

no ones replied so ima reply... i think B, coz it will reach us in as we all write.
peace~roX~

^^Hey, is that a pity vote?! Cos if it is *shakes fists at roxy.*...oh, no, i aint a woman beater or anything...but then again, that could be seen as sexist, right?...

Anyway, though it's going slow. I think it'll slowly pick up.

Thanks for voting roxy.

I'ma vote A, could spawn sum creative stuff off that start

A
The bronze skin becomes pale in darkness
Ears become soft from never wanting to hark this
A warning to the soul to escape from exclusion
And to be like them, but it's an illusion

My vote goes for A. Sounds like a good start for something and I'm interested in seeing where it goes from there.

Yo I got something already so this is to carry on from A

A
The bronze skin becomes pale in darkness
Ears become soft from never wanting to hark this
A warning to the soul to escape from exclusion
And to be like them, but it's an illusion
-
Their Misuse will cause their own conclusion
Their combined Fusion is a complexity,
not at heart with dillusion.
And to spite them is a sacraliege,
Their roots delve 20,000 leagues.

Okay addlib. A is the one that will go to the next phase.

Drop your second stanza in the new thread i'm about to create.

Oh, and any chance you could cut it down to just 4 lines? Thought i'd keep it simple for the first cypher.

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