The Graveyard
 

A dope verse I made for the Poetry Tournament, it was closed, so I couldn't get responses, so tell me what you think. This is based upon a true story...Metaphorically of course....

I walk through the Graveyard with flowers in my hand
It feels like the millionth time I've walked through this land
And the trek that I make is one full of sorrow
Everytime I make it, I wish there was no tomarrow
And then I arrive at that lonely grave
The name reads: Jill Emma Redave
Born 1986 Died 2003
"The loveliest girl that ever would be."
See her parents truly loved her with all of their heart
But I loved her more that with her I still can't part
See I can still recall my desire
And every revery I have is on fire
See everytime we met, in my heart there was a burning
Because every night we spent together was the heat of yearning
And I can't take not ever seeing her again
And I pulled out what would let me see her in heaven
And on her cross, I boar Christ's position in which he died
Blood flowed from my head from where I lied
This loss was something that I couldn't get over on my own
And next to her I got my own Gravestone...

ay, I'm feelin it...it used light and easy words, but had a heavy meanin to it...keep doin u

it was one of those w/ a simplistic touch but stil conveys the deepness w/ finesse, good piece...

simple,but deep,i like this kind of poems.and i feel this one.

the good die young...

that shit was tight man you should join illegal crew even though im not in that shit no more lyricbrutalizer knows what he is doing