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IM 06-02-03 11:46 PM

Rep. For The Fam.
 
LA' FAMILIA IS THE FAM. THAT I REP. TO THE MAX.,
AND IF I MURDER CATS ON TEXT THEN IMAGINE THAT I SEND THEM TO HELL ON WAX, NO MOP AND GLOW, I LET YOU FOOLS SHOP MY FLOW CAUSE NO WACK MC CAN STOP THE SHOW.
LA' FAMILIA' RULES THIS SITE, I CAN'T EVEN SEE PLENTY OF YOU CATS AND YA'LL BE READY TO PULL OUT TOOLS TO FIGHT, AND THE ONLY WAY YA'LL SHINE IS WHEN YA'LL STAND IN THE SUN TO MAKE YOUR JEWELS LOOK BRIGHT. MAN, YA'LL SURE YA'LL NEED 15 LINES CAUSE I COULD DROP CATS IN LESS THAN THAT OFF THIS WEB, LEAVING CHUMPS CONFUSED IN THE HEAD CONSTANTLY PUSHING POST NEW THREAD, WISHING LA' FA' MIL' WAS DEAD, A LOT OF THESE FAGGOT DUDES BETTER OFF SPITTING ON COCKS IN BEDS WITH TOM, DICK, HARRY, AND GREG. MY CREW IS A CRUCIAL CONFLICT TO MESS WITH LIKE THEM KIDS SMOKING HAY IN THE BARN, OTHER CREWS LIKE STROKING GAYS AND SINGING PLAY SONGS. ENIGMATIC, BLUNT MC, THE UNREAL ONE, 2TYMA, AND THE POORTORICAN, YEAH AMATEURS SHUT THE HELL UP WHEN GROWN RAP PROFESSIONALS ARE SPEAKING. I REP. FOR THE FAM. THAT'S REAL AND SPIT THAT MATERIAL THAT'S RAW, AND THE ONLY BATTLES YOU OTHER CREWS CAN BRING US IS A TAPE OF DENZEL IN GLORY OR A HISTORY BOOK TALKING ABOUT THE CIVIL WAR.

A2Z 06-02-03 11:52 PM

wasnt feeling this at all, flow was nice but i wasnt feeling the caps or the fact that youll say random shit to rhyme like

You know La Familia is best//
Bitch get off ya moms breast//

shit like that, im too lazy to find example but i remember thinking about it

nicdrop....5/10

Bash 06-02-03 11:53 PM

lol........I was kinda feelin dis...........Could have been better..........Ur concept was Weak.......Tha way u typed this drop was weak..............Dont type ur drops in paragraph form........This Lacked vocab......................But it was an Aight drop........Nice way too rep ur Crew..........Return da favour http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=52756

Enigmatic 06-03-03 11:31 AM

.La Familia.
 
This joint was pretty good... you should've made the lines easier to read. Other than that, the vocab. needs to be upped a little bit. Otherwise, it was hot, and you were reppin' the click. Keep elevatin' my nigga! .La Familia. representin'...

BlUnT-MC 06-03-03 12:54 PM

holla.. I agree with enig.. na'm'say'n, up your vocab and space your lines a little better.. work on some punches too.. way 2 rep tha crew.. when r u gonna get me your collab verse dawg.. 1

Reno Starr 06-03-03 02:57 PM

Wasnt really feeling it but it had a decent flow, you need to not do it in caps and like everyone else said need to work on spacing and shit like that. Return tha love peep my drop, My Life http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=53052


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