Freestyle off tha dome.
 

Me and a friend of mine was on aol chillin.
And we decided to freestyle in im.
Peep and rate.

- Shadow God
We spit on mics to internet to im chats regardless...Some of you niqs ain't real rap lyricists, Yall just artists...And Shadow don't need to go further...Cause if I have to speak my mind, Somebody's gonna catch tha barrel end of my ruger...Who really want it with me and and my niq?...Nobody that's why tha streets are quiet when we walk, Open to give a free body. Who wants to be a hero, Holla at me dun, Fa sho I'll make you heard...A buck shot to ya dome slot, Makin ya body submerge right against tha curb...Lyrically spittin switchblades with grenadle combustions...Might as well call me daddy, I'm bout to be ya momma's new husband. My mind is a weapon, Spittin continuous, Obliteratin every member of ya team without a witness, Givin a spiritual gift to rip flesh into shreds, Shadow God never sleeps in a bed, I'm awake, 24/7, Mic in my left, I contend with any one startin at eleven, I don't think they want it when tha duo get together, We rock better shit than ya leather.

- J Hood101(His sn...He dun have a rap name I dun think.)
when we come through eryone duckin and runnin, cus they know we gunnin and buckin keepin it hip tight like concield weapons we keep outta site, ima tru ta heart city boy fuck radio friendly i aint strapped but ill pull ma gat and bus off caps pull ma dick out and put in the extra clips in ma nut sac 95% of these artists is wack think they spittin somethin but all they doin is bitein off biggie pac and L sayin its they own shit dog dont u know dick ridas and hatas get shot up and heated up in hell? i aint that great but i anit fake, it sma own shit ma own clip ma own bitch and ma own whip nothins rented fa videos thas ma house ma dog and clothes ma shine ma crys and ma hos, nothin i spit is writtin ill admit i might take one line but thas it dont have a fit dont start cryin im not liein its to real u gettin all mad and shit over nothin sorry these lines u cant feel i hear the hate in ya rhymes like u gettin pissed off but dogg its only music u on ma dick but id like fa u ta get off to many bitches on it already us a dude so act like it but its kinda hard ta tell when i can hear u cryin in yo rhymein but its ok eryone get scared sometimes.

G H O S T.

Up'

you know, I've never really said this in open mic, but I hated this.
nothing personal, I just think that the rhyme scheme was simple,
the flow was off, there was vitually no vocab, it didn't have any
kind of message, and it talked about the same shit every newb
who listens to mainstream spits. It rhymed and everything, so
technically it was a rap, but it was the shittiest one I've read from
someone capable of doing better.
what the hell posessed you to write this? the bars weren't even organized.
shit