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artifacts 06-03-03 12:48 PM

something's wrong verse 1.....peep this topic
 
here's the story...the guys standing in the mirror and he beats his wife and he's contimplating why he does it..and in the mirror he's talkin to himself

this is only the first verse..............



i'm really not beatin my wife-
i'm not sayin what i'm doing is wrong
i'm not sayin what i'm doing is right
i just do it cause her ego's too strong and at times we just don't get along/
damn! it's like your a whole diffrent person-
start slappin ya wife get up and start cursing/
how you gonna smack your bitch in the face-
you a disgrace not even part of the human race/
gettin violent everytime you drink a case-
start takin off ya belt following for the big chase/
damn you besta stand at ease!-
i heard shock camp wasn't a breeze and just because ya caught flee's, doesn't mean she's on the streets
think?....how you gonna let the girl cheat on you anyway-
ha! remember the time because she put shit on layaway?
throwin her against the wall scream tearin her hair away/
fuck! what were u thinkin, you got youself in some shit-
and you keep sinkin/

Bmack 06-03-03 01:22 PM

This wasn't that great...You critique everyone elses raps negatively and then you bring this rookie minded flow to the board. You bring down people's esteems man...this was so basic...I suggest you elevate before you comment on anyone's shit again...I wasn't feelin this sorry...from the way you talk and showboat yourself..i was expecting better


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