What happened?
 

Victims from the grim and slim road I fast track and travel in//
Get ingested, exhale while I'm restin, like fuckin halogens//
Pushed away like the wind, another day, another win//
I've travelled away from where I've been.. Another day, Another Sin//
Studio to Studio, mic to the fist(pause) right to the grit of a life that's lifeless//
Timeless, time to time, find this shit rewindless//
Cuz time stops when i spit, seconds stop, attracted by the height of my shit//
I'm binded.. by the hopes and lyrical content that excretes from crowds like comments//
Hip hop aint diminished, only bruised to the core, from some rappers who think they gangsta by showin no remorse//
When if fact they ain't killin nobody, in fact look to tha source//
The fans hurt, they leave, it's a dramatically sad divorce//
Like when did we stop tha hype? When did we wrong tha right?//
It's life, starts of hard to the core but ends soft and lite//
But in fact, it's like the heavens above sent a glistening light//
So bright that it shines through back alleys in the shadow of night//
Shines upon true rappers and explodes their voice//
And brings back a familiar vibe and a poetic choice//
Let rap fade away like withered leaves on cold days//
Or pray, say," God I don't want it to leave, I want it here to stay"//
The thread started off a diss yet a priority arose//
Should I burn a next emcee, or rap about life out in the bold//
But this a rap, it's your decision, just try to envision my vision//
Stay away from commercialism, get constricted like cells in a prison//
Hip Hop is in your action, reaction and in your passion//
Now it's only "clappin", tragic, what the fuck happened?//

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Yo i made this out to all the pussies who ruin hip hop so they can sell some more copies. Like it or not, it's just something I put together quicktime. I know it ain't the best shit but meh......

That was a ill verse, TakTik.

It ain't the best I can do but it's more of a lyrical warmup for when I go battling so enjoy,.......i hope

.....any comments?....points of imporvement?......

i basically jus made it for Ja Rule intentionally because I'm pissed off in how he is making hip hop look like strictly a money market and fans can be thrown away like rags, he ruining hip hop in my eyes and he's not alone.

i tink it's alright

That's crazy yo, Taktik is spittin some shit

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lyrical lemonade

I dont think I've read anything of yours before... But, it pretty decent... Need some work in certain area's but over all it was nice. OoNnEe