insight?
 

strength is irrelevant when it comes to the intel i spit//
exspellin kids with hellish spits,developin tsunamis//
stomping out armys with karma bombs dropping//
im the quiet before the storm that doesnt give warning//
and im the killer bees swarming down your esophagus//
cloggin oxygen passages by ravaging your lung cavity//
capacity overrun,the aftermath begun,kats gettin hung//
lynched kids resume defensless,torture them endless//
scorchin you in portions of diced dimensions,relentless//
i split limbs into bits like how twigs and sticks get//
get bent in half as i jab at kats with fork and spoon platoons//
entomb your remains within the sands of dakar//
leaving scars amongst the bars of lifes cell block//
gotta outrun the sunset before the clocks hand stops//
cuz when time stands still we all come to dead stop//

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um that gets a 4....!

ummh ok reject.

up...

sorry was'nt really feelin this..you got good vocab, and it SHOULD have been longer!

keep spittin!

ok wanna elaborate?