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Erratik Assassin V.S. mercurio
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16 lines No crew/hata/dr votes I'll spit first All other regular stips apply |
Ayyo...check it...one, two...
Mercurio you couldn't touch my spits if you tried to kiss me frenchin // You remind me of Shady/Aftermath cuz you only worth 50 Cents man // You make me wanna 'url and I ain't talkin hyperlinks, it's simple potna // The lead falls from my uzi like a pencil sharp'na // You can't understand my shit so you "Rewind" it like Nas // And my voice come through his speakers as loud as the Wizard of Oz // Your lines make no sense like George Bush blabbin // And your voice is so annoyin sound like it's a porpous laughin // This groupie grabs more of Eminems junk like he means it's war // Than a little fat kid hungry at a convenience store // I pity this fool like Mr. T this kiddie gets schooled like little Gs // My shit burns ya so bad it's like I'm spittin at you wit listerine // I spark my static at you like your clothes has just gotten dried // And my rank in rap is so high people thinkin that I just gotten fried // And your name confuses the forum you're losin this war, I'll loosen the score // Cuz I'm cruisin the board - I'm like Tennessee cuz it's like I'm shootin for Gore, you a nuisance fa sure // |
erratik assassyn is about to get assasynated,
im gona stab u in the face then get u creamated u the pussy, im a dick nice and stimulated all ur rhymes is fake none iz origionated im a make u hurt fool every rhyme i use is a killing tool u needz to go bak to skool im ridin u like a mule il ride u out til u so thirsty ur sippin on ur own drool and wutz wit u keep saying shit against me with eminem? i heard the shit from ur boy about u goin to clubs feminin dressed up as a women gettin ready to get them in takin it up the ass like a whore on vikidin yea.. that shit was relaly weak, n i kno i lost this battle |
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Uppin for votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! People are you sleepin? C'mon.
(damn 100 characters shit) |
yo ill vote up this shit for sure if u hit up brabbit vs white trash hit it up farely aight and ill return the favour an hit up this battle fa sho aight!!!!!!!!!!
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Neither me or merucio have 100+ posts, we can't vote. .................................................. .................................................. ..........................................
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yo erratik u still havent improved since last time
i thought u woulda did better than that..still props but why havent u improved more than that??? usually when u stit 1st, you go hard not knowing the odds of loosin & if thas whachu call hard man u neva had a chance aginst me last time..well i voted ya 1 |
hit my battles up against:
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I told you QB, (A) I don't like freestyling, and (B) I forget ideas too easily. I'm gonna start keepin my unused bars in a notebook or somethin. Not the exact bar cuz that's pre-written, just shit like...if it was the pencil sharpener one I'd be like "Alright, I'ma put down lead falling from a pencil sharpener." I was gonna do that before but too many people bitched about that being a pre-written so I stopped - but every freestylist and/or rapper has to think over his bars before he uses him - fuck some use their bars more than once.
And damn, I DON'T HAVE 100 POSTS YET! |
well this site is more complex, i doubt they'd say thats a written unless they comare it to your other freestyle battles or their wack which rarely happens
and i hope that isn't your online record TOTAL damn you shoulda kept goin like me & soldier |
It is my total, it's been hard findin battles lately. At the 50 Cent forum, everything was straight garbage, anyone there who still rapped I either beat them before or they were retiring. And I told you everywhere else crashed. Then I remembered "What was that place that the dude at Verbal Kombat told me about?" and that's when I went to FU, and then I remembered you talkin bout this place and I was like "Hey, I gotta go somewhere."
I'm hopin to do a lot more battles this summer, I'ma try to do atleast 5 a week - right now I'm doin like 3 a week. |
oh i see, well look at my register date & you'll see how long i got where i am. i waste no time especially when i got time.
umm i thought you retired & just fa thought you never even challenged or went aginst me. after u chaged ya username its like you disappeared. this is the only place that i find more conveinent but by sunday i'll be out. you remember dame dash rite?...well he's findin another place thats better than this. hopefully it'll be less dick rydin & newb's since its not new. but this place was for temporarily purposes. look at whene my profile says in from..lol umm well when he finds that site i'll be sure to get it to you & knowing him it'll be hott. |
Aiight man - if I find any forums I'll let you know. Back when I said I was takin my break from 50's forum I found Verbal Kombat, Verbal Raps, The Spot!, Brilliant Illness, and Freestyle Underground. They're all down now, except for FU (currently at) and VK (they don't like me there lol).
Yeah and I saw that thing where you from lol. |
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