unfinished track just need opinions
 

ok dis is unfinished im waitin on my boys but i want opinions on my verse so far so let me know wat u think iight holla.....

lofi
http://www.soundclick.com/util/stre...?ID=381682&q=Lo

hifi
http://www.soundclick.com/util/stre...?ID=381682&q=Hi

Dope flow..quality needz work..Good drop tho..lol yur style is dope too..Beat is raw

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shiitz heated....lemme git on that shit dogg.....anywayz flowed nice as fucc......loved it

1Luv
Cin Ladin

thanks so far but i need more and cin sorry duke dis is sumthin me and my boys offline is doin but u know any other time i got u just holla..........

die slow