a lil guitar a lil gangsta
 

wut up all. im new to rapbattles and i jus wanna know what everybody opinion is on this track. its just a quick two verses and hook so plz download the mp3 and tell me what yall think of the track. its called sink like rocks.

sink like rocks

-5k aka multiverseal

Work on your quality dogg.............................................. ..............................Peace

quality? could you be more specific?

what you talkin about quality? my shit sounds better than yours. and you have all that expensive software hahahah.

i aint hatin or anythin its just that i do everythin with a computer mic ($10), acid 2.0 ($20) and some keyboard program that came free with my cheap computer. and i mix high.

now if you clicked on the track combat offenseive? thats supposed to sound like that, you know like a battlefield radio. so ignore what little static there might be and peep the track leave some feedback about it on the rap and beat man.

btw kyleigh track was hot but the vocals mixin for the main dude was not. the vocals mixin was good on the west side track.

peace

You've got a nice voice. In my opinion you're using it wrong. You need to stop trying to fit so many words into bars. You need to stretch certain words longer. And try a simpler rhyme scheme. But remember this is in my opinion. If its the underground-super-long-bar style your aiming for then you've succeeded but i still stand by my suggestion for a simpler rhyme scheme.

By the way. Your quality is hot if you only used a computer mic.

thank you keelo. expect to see some different style tracks up soon. right now im still in the "fucking around with style" stage. i'll see what works. see duce this is the kind of feedback i want, specifics.

peace