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WORD~PERFECT 06-04-03 04:16 PM

The Judgement
 
i father your rhymes,and hyms-my name chimes to minds-
lyrical ancestor-beat the lessons out your young flow like a child neglector-
it's been a long~ time~ cuming .... now that i have-im zipping up the insudtry treat it like trailor park trash-" hit it ,and pass"-
see the whole world fear us,..... street's just~us(justice) ,clash with the miss classed-
when i bust thus,... leaven you a fragment throwing stones with a jaw made of pain glass-held togeather by plain molass-
colliding with me... words take form and conform to the effects of a car crash-
we dont match up physically apperencly......we just clash-not in just what is adopted by earlobes-from mic tone to baratones and mano~tones-
you got giving head to an artist you dickrodes microphone-
i pack FULL HOUCE,ask your spouce i pack a full mouth- never see me fold-spit flames with a cold- watch me give bold sun tans and frost bites with arttic molds- to eskimos-
at a HOUCE PARTY battle.... dAWG watch WHAT YOU SAY-i show the lighter side of you being gay-like before break up photos of kriss kross and KID AND PLAY-
get the fuck off me!!!! this world infected by industry pussies thats whack on wax-so i came with a crew to train you all on the same track-to,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
take this dick !!!! with the bust motion-of a thrust locomotion-
with NOS.....depos- while im ripping flames on the industry like the next holocaust-
im here to stay so beware- your raps trailor home version on microphone got a chance.... and going no where-

deeni 06-04-03 04:21 PM

pretty nice. i liked the wordplay. the bar structure was also on point. keep it comin

Bash 06-04-03 06:50 PM

Nice ish man.......Ur wordplay was Nice

DaviD WoRdplay 06-04-03 08:22 PM

this was a dope drop.........

we need to get our collab with Mad Man soon.....

Spitzophrenic 06-04-03 09:16 PM

Tight Shyt Bro.. Loved This Piece... One Word 2 Describe It Dawg Ill... I Liked It All Except Ur Rhymin Scheme Could Be Improved..

pZ Playah... 1 Love.. $pitzophrenic

WORD~PERFECT 06-05-03 08:17 AM

mnad respects and schitz what can improve aboute it

Saladin 06-05-03 09:47 AM

ILLness dunz..

Your wordplay gets better with every drop...

WORD~PERFECT 06-05-03 01:12 PM

SO YOU LIKED


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