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PleDge 06-04-03 07:42 PM

A miss you so
 
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A girl is sittin holdin a photograph of her lover..tears in her eyes

Its amazin how days can quickly turn into years
how that someone can help you draw back the tears
make you feel fearless and so alive inside
when they tell you how much they love you..eyes filled wit pride
minutes seem like hours when your by theyre side
pray for this moment to last untill the end of time
but sadly fate comes and it took you away
and you are no longer apart of my every day
like i river i cry hurtfilled tears of unhappiness
i wait for my hurt to to stop..but it is endless
i never had the chance to say goodbye to you
i wanted to tell you how much you meant to me boo
but it was too late a seen you fall down on your knees
blood spillin out of your chest as your hand reached for me
I just froze not knowing whether to advance
i retreated and watched you die from where i stand
life was black....and my feelings were confused
i couldnt understand how i was to go on...
couldnt live witout you
Anger began to boil and rose up thru ma body
endothermic reactions of guilt rose up inside me
my heart tore into pieces and scatterd all around
and for the rest of my life my dreams shall be haunted with the sound
of your fate of that gun from that young black males hand
and the smirk on his face after killing a white man
you never knew these people personnally...
they just noticed a difference in skin
brought up with parential advisery
if you see them....then kill

I wanted to run over but i was afraid of what might have happened
if theyd laugh or shoot me ma mind was already battlin
about whether you were dying or going to live
if i could have helped you there my everything i would give
for you o just take one more breathe and be here with me now
but you died and left me although your here some how
reprocusions of that night play oer and over in my hed
i remember our good times at niht when i lay awake in mybed
and as i turn my head to the side your heads next to mine
your heart and soul is with me untill the end of time
and whever life leads me i kno that you shall go
and incase that you can hear me boo
just kno i miss you so

Rest In peace

Saladin 06-04-03 08:16 PM

awww..

this was heartfelt mami..

we all miss our loved ones that we have lost...
this was filled with emotion..
really feelin this fam..

and as i turn my head to the side your heads next to mine
your heart and soul is with me untill the end of time
and whever life leads me i kno that you shall go
and incase that you can hear me boo
just kno i miss you so

No Doubt!!

Peace
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Poppa Kap 06-04-03 08:21 PM

gret stuff really heart felt...peeps dont sleepm its a great read :)...its kool kissin an ass if the battlers a woman lol

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PleDge 06-04-03 08:21 PM

thanks fam..uppin

Bash 06-04-03 08:44 PM

Heartfelt Drop........I was really feelin this...so sweettttttttttttt......................Nice Piece.........U messed up on this tittle though...Its says A MISS YOU SO

~RuThLEss~ 06-04-03 08:44 PM

DAMNNNNNNNNNNN SADNESS IN THIS PIECE AND EMOTIONS WERE RUNNIN..............NICE DROP MA

PleDge 06-04-03 08:47 PM

lol @bash..thanks dawg ma mind was elsewhere when a done that lol......thanks for everyones opinions....uppin

WOOSHY 06-04-03 08:53 PM

deep as fuck man ya know dope shit 2 i like this good work

Passivist 06-04-03 08:56 PM

damn tight.............felt........reminds me of my girlfriend Cara.......... good piece....

Passivist 06-04-03 09:17 PM

piece made me cry

~HoTTie~ 06-05-03 04:51 PM

awww it was soo sad....*wipes tears*.....it was sweet sis...real nice

Passivist 06-05-03 05:19 PM

yes it was

PleDge 06-05-03 07:34 PM

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Eviley 06-05-03 07:48 PM

this was awesome i really felt this
the emotion my eyes literally got watered
good shit
stay up girl

PleDge 06-05-03 08:26 PM

thanks gurl :) uppin


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