Erratik Assassin vs. rYdoGG (2)
 

(The last wasn't a BATTLE, my bad)

10-20 lines
No DR, hater, crew, etc. etc.

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I'm peelin the tech - ya death is the next answer //
Got ya feelin ya chest like you checkin for breast cancer //
I'm "off the Hook" like the Captain~hand //
You're rappin~and - your raps get tossed like a jav-e-lan //
I carry so much heat that my uzis shoot UV rays //
And Lucy I'ma have to "explain" to the doctor why you're bruised and shanked //
Dial 911 cuz I'm fillin your body up like morphine //
More holes than a door~screen - broken bones and torn~spleen //
I'm so hot on the radar I get confused~with~the~sun //
I'm like a point guard fa sho when I finish shootin~I~run //
Sorry for stressin the heat but it makes you run to an air~conditioner //
You ain't wanted at Rap Battles like Nair hair~conditioner //

Here's his:

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sorry u aint in tha mood right now
i dont care cuz u gon lose right now
talkin bout cho uzis that spit UV rayz
a gotta AK thatll ruin ya whole day

u say that chu are even hotter than the sun
you ARE like a point guard-pull out tha gat and u run
like u got any business tryin ta STEP UP
fallin down tha stairs like u tryin ta GET UP

u aint no assassin but ill assassinate u
come on run up on me wut tha fuck u gon do
wait...i no wutchu gon do rite now, at least u should
go home tell yo mama u juss got beat like u would...

have u definitely shoulda listened to me
i dont no y u tried to battle wen ur missin on me
i dodge ur rapz like imma duck and cover
u need ta see tha doctor cuz
yo rapz like little kidz that need ta run home 2 their mother

Uppin for votes............................................. .................................................. ................

Uppin for votes people, what the fuck - no one ever votes on here - as soon as I get 100 posts, that's what I'ma do, vote on every single battle I see - damn

Do me a favor...hit up this sleepin battle an i will return here wit an honest vote...ya kno im tru ta my word...i always change my posts ta votes when ya peep my battles...thank you..
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=52433

OH MY GOD!!!!!!!!!!

DO YOU PEOPLE NOT LISTEN!?!?!?!?!

"I"
"Cannot"
"Vote"

"You"
"Need"
"100"
"Posts"
"To"
"Vote"

How many times do I gotta say it? I don't stress it enough I guess.

...This site is horrible - what's with the lack of votes? Is everybody lazy? Every other forum does full-out explained votes more in-depth than the ones I've seen you guys do and they vote 10 times more than you guys.

Uppin for votes............................................. .................................................. ....................................

UPPIN FOR VOTES!!!!! This site's horrible, is it always like this? .................................................. ........................

Damn, I'll be able to vote soon at this rate, all I do is up my thread. Doesn't anyone vote around here? ...........................

daym this niggaz rite..........how come nobody fuckin votez god dammit shiat.....FUCK-ING-VOTE.....shit....pyace

do any uf u stupid fuckhead bastardz no how to fucking vote?....cmon sum1 vote on this.....shit....pyace

cmon yall hook this shiat up i need a win yall hook it up ill return tha favor as soon as i get 100 posts.........pyace

cccccooooooommmmmmeeeeee oooonnnnn now.......fucking vote yalll hook ya boy uop ill return tha fava wen i hit 100 postz....pyace

The second one had way better flow but the punches werent there. i still feel the lack of choppyness helped the second one win over, i think it was Rydogg but i aint sure. Ill vote when i know who it is and if you peep my battle aiight.....one
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=54422