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My flows iz lethal my rhymes'll eat u//
This iz the prequel amd you'll have no sequel//
I'll treat u like a bicth and instigate on yo shit//
I'll sick blood and cryp until yo whole body splits//
U keep on talkin shit and see if I don't catch u//
I'm Def by mouf fuck wit me and i'll wet u.

ok if that was in a battle you woulda been lackin punches word play and multis

Up dat vocab at the end cuz it got a lil weak
and try to use (-) so i have a betta understandin on how u sayin it
You lackin punches juss dont say u gonna do sumin tell dem how w/ creativity

aiight
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too short hear to offer any real advice