Blue Skies |_
 

Blue Skies


Looking into the blue filled skies
I see a sea of clouds and reminisce
Wishing everyday could be this different
The beauty of the sky reminds me of a beauty beyond mines

The wind blows with a smooth caressing touch across my face
The feel of such a thing caused past thoughts to arise
My eyes connect with the mystic amazement of the sky
I think of a beauty I know as the white clouds pass by

The light that's held within this cool sky seems so divine
A plane passes by and I wish to my love I could fly
Lookin' into the sky I thank god for sending this angel of mine
My heart fills with a mysterious feeling looking into this blue sky

As I look into the sky a love song begins to play
The words and the feel fills me with a unique aura
The creation of words in my mind wishes to stay
The beauty of a blue sky will always shape my poetic wayz

At a glance most would see but neva fully understand
A blue skys' beauty can never be touched by hand
My heart opens widely as the clouds are passing
The true beauty of this sky will forever be everlasting

Nice use of words, very discriptive and creative. =)

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Good creativity and some nice imagery
Like this piece alot

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uppin'

hey i was really into this poem here...i mean cuz people sometimes dont appreciate tha beauty this world gives us nah mean...i remember when i was lil i would always stare at tha sky for hours..i didnt know why i did i just did but now i know why..lol..tha sky is a beautiful sight...well anyways nuff bout that..cool poem..pz

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