The Dream (inspired by sand)
 

as i lay my head down sleep
i begin see things and i begin to dream
in a world of unreal
nothing is as it seems
i close my eyes and i dissapear
and reality seems to reappear
visions of what is going to happen
awakeing suddenly just to stop them
i feel haunted, by what i didnt know then
things seem the be deja vu all over again
but it all show's that i care for you
i should not sleep anymore
it's something that i just can't do
cause if my eyes can't close
then i can't have these dreams about you
somethings you can write about and feel better
but this is to hard it just won't settle
i wake up suddenly to a phones ring in the backround
it's my ex with the same dream or so it sounds
my heart pounds
i didnt want to fall asleep in which i did
i didnt need the truth because i already dreamt it
i hear the same damn shit over and over
but in my dream i felt the fillings i gave her
i was inside her
looking towards me
strange perspective that i had to see
but i realized i should just let them be
but letting them be is like letting her go
because i can't release her my emotions are slow
they won't leave me alone
but a thought came across me
when i was on the phone
Eva was speaking in a poetic tone
maybe we should just be friends for now
until you know
then i won't go she said out of no where
but it has to be for you why you don't wanna go there
but what i didnt know she stopped to think
stopped to stare
cause the feelings she had for her alex was there
she saw him that very same time
a couple of hours ago at the breaking of night
she felt her love grow deep inside
but once again the future decides
if this love is wrong or if it's right
because emotion is out there
they are out to kill
they are my lifes sleeping pill
because where love is present
you can not fight
even if it is done by fate outta spite
it just takes time
to know things are right
but hopefully this isnt the end
for Eviley and her sand of night...

oooooooooooooooo This was Sickness....This piece needs to be Uped.....I was feelin every line Fam.....Tha content was Madd ill...Your Bar structure was Nice.........Uppin for my Fam , was this a Remix to Sand's original "the Dream"

Like Bash said
Fickin dope as hell
EVery part was ill
1one

hopes it's not the end...
like i said....
you can have ryan and sand
over there on the beach in
corpus...but alex cant make it...

very good writing...

dat was good 4 a gurl keepon doin whatchu doin

smokin dro, gender doesn't matter at all.

this was fuckin amazing. it's as good as sand's easily I'd say....
not the same style of writing, but still awesome.
The emotion was killer,its what made me read all the way through.
great work eviley
Peace

thank you to all
of your responses
and it's not a remix
more like reality

SICKNESS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
let me say it again SICKNESS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
that was ILL. This was a great piece fam......UPPIN

thank you alot

Yo that shit was tight but you always bring it so keep it and ill stay tuned. one

thanks alot you shit is pretty tight....

Very hot sequel fam, I was feelin this, Eviley this had to be your best piece yet. I like your style. Bangin

THANK YOU!!! there is alot more to come

UPPIN!!!!!!!!!