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Dadi Kewl 06-05-03 02:56 PM

Why am i
 
Let's get it into every context,
Ahead of the rhyme schemes and dreams,
Ahead of my Pavlovian mind set
Travel the waves of the time and the unknown divine quest
Through the barriers of awareness, dream state and consciousness
Reading the tablatures of great ancients, some allegories
Devistating decisions I've made, I'm impatient, they make 'em for me
Clearly written speeches, translucent data bondage
Grant me the courage to seek the truth, I pursue the Master's knowledge
Pay the past it's homage,
But it's harder to look to the future
Painting regal colors like deep blue or just fushia
Here in tranquil stasis Add get's Rage and Enlightenment
Born of Ice but embraced my the Flame of his dialect
Tell me....can you understand what I just meant,
Can you grasp the wasted years, the tasted tears, and maybe the time I've spent
There ain't much left for me to do now,
I've put my views out,
What's left is for you to get the jist of what I threw out
Power to bow down to vowel sounds of lyrical shoot outs
I tried to give you Addlib , I really tried but what's the use now
You only see the demon fiending for blood, the monster's fueled now
Juvenile attempts to gratify my feelings, that much is futile
This useless text, is used to draw views and moods at best
I graduated from the Shoalin temples, sheltered in the clefts of Budapest
Half the acts are upper class, while half of the staff are actors
While I carry the burden of talent like globe on the back of Atlas
You will never understand the craft of making fabric of glass and acid
The calm of my demenor and the wrath that it has to react with
This is who I am, you got two choices, take it or leave it behind you
But when you crucify me because my rhymes outcompete yours, remember how Jesus had died too.......

GrYm StYlE 06-05-03 02:58 PM

DOPE dope DoPe
Very Nice yo
Keep um coming

Bash 06-05-03 03:00 PM

Dope ass Piece....Ur wordplay was Blazing like Fire...Ur multies were Nice...Overall Nice drop man.......................Return da favour http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=54147

Saladin 06-05-03 03:11 PM

Here in tranquil stasis Add get's Rage and Enlightenment
Born of Ice but embraced my the Flame of his dialect
Tell me....can you understand what I just meant,
Can you grasp the wasted years, the tasted tears, and maybe the time I've spent

Blaze!!..Ya multis are getting doper than mine!!! lmao.

this was ill fam..

feelin this to the max.

peace
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WORD~PERFECT 06-05-03 03:14 PM

uppin

Smokin Dro 06-05-03 03:48 PM

dat was ill keep dats shit up

Dadi Kewl 06-05-03 07:30 PM

Some mo feedback plz

Dadi Kewl 06-05-03 08:24 PM

Uppin

Bmack 06-05-03 08:27 PM

Ahead of my Pavlovian mind set
Travel the waves of the time and the unknown divine quest
Through the barriers of awareness, dream state and consciousness
Reading the tablatures of great ancients, some allegories

Sick Vocab...ill content

Here in tranquil stasis Add get's Rage and Enlightenment
Born of Ice but embraced my the Flame of his dialect
Tell me....can you understand what I just meant,
Can you grasp the wasted years, the tasted tears, and maybe the time I've spent
There ain't much left for me to do now,
I've put my views out,
What's left is for you to get the jist of what I threw out
Power to bow down to vowel sounds of lyrical shoot outs

All I can say is WOW!...proffesional quality indeed playa..

Overall this had to be one of the hottest pieces I've read next to Atetrack's "Zions", Maybe RB Legends??...upp it?

Dadi Kewl 06-05-03 09:04 PM

^Thanks Bmack^

Dadi Kewl 06-06-03 05:50 AM

sum feedback please

~RuThLEss~ 06-06-03 06:38 AM

OOOOH MY LORD....................LOL

SICKNESS IN YO BRAIN DAWG...............U SPit Brilliant scripts...........fosho i wus feelin this and the damn contend niceeeeeeeeee droppppppppppp fam

Dadi Kewl 06-06-03 10:22 AM

Thanx^Up

Dadi Kewl 06-06-03 04:12 PM

Dam yall sleep on good shit>?


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