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Why am i
Let's get it into every context,
Ahead of the rhyme schemes and dreams, Ahead of my Pavlovian mind set Travel the waves of the time and the unknown divine quest Through the barriers of awareness, dream state and consciousness Reading the tablatures of great ancients, some allegories Devistating decisions I've made, I'm impatient, they make 'em for me Clearly written speeches, translucent data bondage Grant me the courage to seek the truth, I pursue the Master's knowledge Pay the past it's homage, But it's harder to look to the future Painting regal colors like deep blue or just fushia Here in tranquil stasis Add get's Rage and Enlightenment Born of Ice but embraced my the Flame of his dialect Tell me....can you understand what I just meant, Can you grasp the wasted years, the tasted tears, and maybe the time I've spent There ain't much left for me to do now, I've put my views out, What's left is for you to get the jist of what I threw out Power to bow down to vowel sounds of lyrical shoot outs I tried to give you Addlib , I really tried but what's the use now You only see the demon fiending for blood, the monster's fueled now Juvenile attempts to gratify my feelings, that much is futile This useless text, is used to draw views and moods at best I graduated from the Shoalin temples, sheltered in the clefts of Budapest Half the acts are upper class, while half of the staff are actors While I carry the burden of talent like globe on the back of Atlas You will never understand the craft of making fabric of glass and acid The calm of my demenor and the wrath that it has to react with This is who I am, you got two choices, take it or leave it behind you But when you crucify me because my rhymes outcompete yours, remember how Jesus had died too....... |
DOPE dope DoPe
Very Nice yo Keep um coming |
Dope ass Piece....Ur wordplay was Blazing like Fire...Ur multies were Nice...Overall Nice drop man.......................Return da favour http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=54147
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Here in tranquil stasis Add get's Rage and Enlightenment
Born of Ice but embraced my the Flame of his dialect Tell me....can you understand what I just meant, Can you grasp the wasted years, the tasted tears, and maybe the time I've spent Blaze!!..Ya multis are getting doper than mine!!! lmao. this was ill fam.. feelin this to the max. peace -1- |
uppin
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dat was ill keep dats shit up
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Some mo feedback plz
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Uppin
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Ahead of my Pavlovian mind set
Travel the waves of the time and the unknown divine quest Through the barriers of awareness, dream state and consciousness Reading the tablatures of great ancients, some allegories Sick Vocab...ill content Here in tranquil stasis Add get's Rage and Enlightenment Born of Ice but embraced my the Flame of his dialect Tell me....can you understand what I just meant, Can you grasp the wasted years, the tasted tears, and maybe the time I've spent There ain't much left for me to do now, I've put my views out, What's left is for you to get the jist of what I threw out Power to bow down to vowel sounds of lyrical shoot outs All I can say is WOW!...proffesional quality indeed playa.. Overall this had to be one of the hottest pieces I've read next to Atetrack's "Zions", Maybe RB Legends??...upp it? |
^Thanks Bmack^
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sum feedback please
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OOOOH MY LORD....................LOL
SICKNESS IN YO BRAIN DAWG...............U SPit Brilliant scripts...........fosho i wus feelin this and the damn contend niceeeeeeeeee droppppppppppp fam |
Thanx^Up
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Dam yall sleep on good shit>?
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