To my slain nigga
 

Yo we was born in the same hospital//
slept in the same bed me on the side you in the middle//
lived the same riddle//
The same bubble //
got into the same trouble//
always togheter never apart my double//
wearing the same clothes and shoes//
fucking with the same hoes confused//
hanging with the drug pros amused//
fighting with the same style one-twos//
knocking niggas out they socks//
flocking to dope fiens selling rocks//
locking the doors to count our stocks//
Me and my nigga ran these blocks//
When his gun went off mine followed//
when the cops came rocks swallowed//
money never borrowed//
it was accepted as presents//
acted like kings but lived like peasents//
graced each other with the others prescence//
any beef came it wasnt pleasant//
Ill always be in debt your companionship never could be reimbursed//still not believing inyour death left on this earth cursed//why is it the good niggas gotta go first//
You always said the best things in life are hid//until the day we meet again ill always be lookin kid//
Rest in peace my brother, my friend, David

this was tight i liked this stay up

it was tight but it was kinda hard to flow with it cuz the lines were to short. Keep elevating It was good.

^^he said it perfectly...nice but ya lines were way too short

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Thanks for the comments ill try to make my lines longer and see how it flows. one.

i stopped readin right when it said u slept in tha same bed, that made me sick

Like tha other cats said....Ur Lines were way too short...But this drop was Nice

Pretty Nice..Holla At Me