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Demon 06-05-03 08:09 PM

Depressing Mood |_
 
An old piece written 11-17-02 at 2:05 am...obviously I was in a depressing mood when I pen'd this |_

Depressing Mood

My mind is lost in a trapped world of emotions
Anger, violence, depression, and sadness fills this ocean
An ocean within myself where there's no help
Everything known to me can never be felt
I travel alone in the darkness that consumes me
At times I feel there's nothin' here for me
No one who wants or needs me to be who I be
The sadness consumes me and takes over
Giving me the feeling of my happiness being over
In this world, it seems as though no one understands me
But I wish someone could care and have me
A lost soul is what I call myself
Wishing someone would lend me their help
But no one seems to wanna reach out
I wonder if anyone would care if I bleed out da mouth
Sometimes I find myself in a state of depression
I guess this is why I hold a question
Not knowing what the question is
Nor knowing an answer for it
When I become this way I don't know what to do
I can't figure out how to change from being blue
I guess I'm sad cuz I feel unloved
But someday someone will become the one

Emcee Juggernaut 06-05-03 10:20 PM

ill shit..felt this one....but people gotta stop make depressing shit in here its getting old....and if u do make it depressing..make sure its true..

Demon 06-06-03 05:16 PM

Thankz 4 da reply........but this was my only depressing piece.....


Respect |_

Demon 06-09-03 03:20 AM

Uppin'

Xxplicit_Dezire 06-09-03 03:30 AM

aww u shouldnt feel unloved and no one should ever feel like that nah mean...but we all go through those moments sometime in life.. cuz i know i have felt wat u wrote about and it sucks to feel that way but once u go through that u gain alot of confidence afterwards nah mean...but ayo nice drop and much luv..pz:)

Demon 06-09-03 03:36 AM

Thank u 4 ur uplifting message........but I'm glad to say I'm past that point in my life......just posted it to see what people would have to say......thank you sweetheart...

Much Luv n Respect |_

Demon 06-10-03 02:47 PM

Feedback..............

Dadi Kewl 06-10-03 02:49 PM

Very deep good content

sad.

Demon 06-10-03 03:25 PM

Thankz 4 da reply................



Respect |_


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