Pain Of Plane...
 

"The Lonlieness, The Solitude, When The Voices In The Wind Start Callin' You"....

So Even After The Hurt After The Lies The Darkness Is In The Skies
Remains The Thought Remains The Shy (S)o(A)lex(N)ever(D)ies
He Weeps And Cries And Lets That Beast Of Lies Tear The Sides
Of His Mind Leave It Dismembered Then Looks Into His Eyes
Faces Comprise The Voices Deny The Love That Lurks The Inside
The Love That Hurts Not Right And Even Makes Him Want To Die
"God Why" Expected That Silent Reply The Vacation He's Hatin'
The Summers He's Been Awaitin' Makes Him Sigh Lost His Patience
And He Can't Comply With How He Doesn't Like The Vacation
To Love's Other Side Feels Like The End Of God's Creation
So If He Has To Die He Has To Make It Special For Conditions
Without Her Knowing, He Goes Online, Purchases A Plane Ticket
Spent All His Cash To Pay San Antonio one Last Terrible Visit
And Swim The Skies And Escapes Life's Love Bar's And Prison ....


"Southwest Airlines Flight 387 Is Now Boarding With Non-Stop Pa Thenssage To San Antonio Texas....Enjoy Your Flight..."


Bored With Living So He Boarded The Death Walked To The Back
He Sat, Passed Her By, She Didn't Notice, She Sat In 1st Class
Where's The Love At? Through The Curtains He Could See
Smiles, She Called Him From The Phone In The Back Of That Seat
"Taking Off Now, About 3 Hours Sweetie" What?! Could It Be
She Uses The Same Name For Him That She Does For Me? God...
I Sat Patiently Hoping For What I Already Knew In The Dreams
And I See. Fuck. How Could She Do This Knowing That She Loved
The Victim, Was Like She Budged And Hit Him Is Heart Was What?
Compared To Pennies In A Cup It Wasn't Too Much God Please...
Take Away The Dreams Let Me Sleep With Out Having To See
Disease Weakens My Knees Death Lets Depression Slip Some...
So Then One Hour Into The Flight The Time Had Finally Come...
The Sigh Of Love The Games She Had Tortured His Head With
He Glanced "The Thoughts" Sitting in This Emergency Exit
Ready To Exit Step Out Of The Door The Turned The Knob More
Screamed Out "Whore!" She Looked Over And She Saw Him
Still Talkin' Enjoyin Goodtimes Too Much To Even Stop Him....
His Last Words Echoed "The Grin The Smile That Stare Was Cute"
And Alex Daskalos Skydived, Without A Fucking Parachute...


"Ladies And Gentlemen On Behalf On Southwest Airlines We Give Our Deepest Apoligies For The Antics On This Flight...Welcome To San Antonio"


Now He Was Surely Dead, His Body Thrashed Found In Pieces
But He Hadn't Met Satan , And Sure As Fucking Hell Not Jesus
All He Had Tried Was To Please He Needs Her In The Dark
His Soul Had Traveled To The Deepest Part Of Her Heart The Start
Of The End The Darkness Blends With The Light Look At her Face
Sense The Dismay All His Purpose Was To Make Those Flares Stop
'N When She Saw Him Happiness' Bubbles Hurled Him Out The Top
He Fell Out Her Mouth With A Cough. What In The Fuck?!
He Ended Up In His...Swam Around The Inside Of His Mind...
Amazed At The Suprises He'd Find . The Start Of The End Of Time
He Couldn't Tell If He Had Loved Eva Or Not. He Prayed he Did...
Because He Was Gone She Should Be Happy Whoever She's With
So He Climbed Out, Finished Not Caring What Anything Else Was About...
But It All Changed....When Ryan Coughed Him Up....In Someone Elses Mouth...

Oops...



Pain Of Plane....

oooooooooooooooooooooooooooo Sand I was loving this Piece dawg.....This shit would be A Sickkkkk Audio......U stayed on topic , u never fell off......Man U tore this shit up dawg

damn.
dude, you leave me fucking speachless.....
but I'll point out that if you opened the door on a plane, most of the people in that section would've been sucked out too...
and even Arnold couldn't have opened one in his Conan days....
but, thats just a technicality.

the last verse was amazing. I wasn't aware souls could be passed around and such, but it was still wicked awesome sweetness, to use a few adjectives.
so much for speechless, eh?
Peace

Sweet post, man. The story was captivating, the rhymes were tight...you kept me reading. Props.

this was awesome
i liked it full of
emotion tons of it
ILove you....

good writing

Another legend i think
Very very nice


LoL

Yes this was very creative and a wonderful piece


^^I really liked that bit

Yeah really great piece to read *read's it aova 5 times*
Blinding****

-one love-

Really glad you put this back up.

daaaaamn sand, this shit was hotttttttt
i was feelin the whole topic and the whole verse
shit...
1

up...legend votes?

This is Legends material....4 sho......Return da favour http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=54967

this shit was fuckin great. man....it was a wonderful topic, great lyrics and just overall wonderful. keep spittin man..........wow

holy shit,that soem sicc shit kid,perfect topic u stayed on point ima go re read this and have to step mah game,good work.1

defianately legend

werd....

kind weird eva thinks
this is a legend....but
thats really cool thank
you....

ill get at that eventually
bash. mad busy lately...