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KRISSKASS 06-07-03 03:50 AM

Tilt Da world of its axis..
 
World spins the same time as man sins ..
The devil always has his last grin..
You have no choice but live under his ring..
Don't be another puppet unda his string..
rise up to da occasion and bring da pain as it reigns..
Terror on all da system for many times it has beating us..
no cuss for da fuss cus i'm here to unstruct..
The optimus prime against those faces in pennys,quarters & dimes.. Crimes set on the lowest cast to be our last..
Got to think fast to feel the rash of this elite mass.
I know better than to carry da brass.
I want da gold to make a statement around da world in all pavements.. So tilt da world of its axis.. Change comes when you you know the scum you have brung from da past and the present..sam song.. Hold on like you gripping a bong.. Take a hit and sing dat song.. Fire in the sky as the earth rotates, another life dies, but one is born to fry in the evils eye..
I'm out tilting the earth's axis as i glide the fastest..

Kosta 06-07-03 04:03 AM

started out better than it ended...
you had short bars. which was nice
then they got real long...which took
away from the structure a whole
lot. the message was nicely approached
lyricism could be upped a lot...keep
elevating...you have tons of potential

SYNOPSIST 06-07-03 05:54 AM

THIS WAS AN AIIGHT JOINT SON, BUT I THINK IT WAS TO STRAIGHTFORWARD AND DRY WITHT HE WORDPLAY WHEN I CLICKED INTO THIS JOINT I EXPECTED SOME DEEP SHIT BUT YOU FELL SHORT, TIS ALL GOOD THO WE ALL START OFF SOMEWHERE

Bash 06-07-03 11:46 AM

I didnt read what i expected to read.......But it was still an aight piece


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