Sand (1-1) vs. fgee (2-1)
 

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Topic...
Life of silence

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8 months of a confined space and i was ready to show my head
skin and flesh around me heaved as my host bled...my cord followed me out into docs hands from between legs
cut free i was welcomed into a loving moms arms
cradled and kissed my young mind sensed i was safe from harm
i gazed up at the ceiling a face and eyes looking back down
lips parted revealing a friendly smile now....round brown things reflected an image of me no doubt
a bald boy wrapped in a towel...the cotton so soft
doors slammed....a male voice was heard and all of a sudden i was held aloft!
'Look at our beautiful baby, Jane.....isnt he perfect?'
cogs turned beneath the surface but what had they blurted?
only time would tell but just now i felt hungry...i craved for food
tears welled in my eyes i tried to scream...then i saw skin nude...raised to a nipple i grabbed a milky boob
with my small mouth i sucked for the white stuff....it was hard goin and soon i'd had enough
yawning i felt my eye lids become lead....daylight vanished and my sub-conscious took over instead
what happened avoided my memory bank.....awake i gazed up from railed surroundings but the rest was blank
coming to again the light of day revealed all....i struggled to see more but all i could see was a brightly coloured wall
in my struggle i felt the need for more fluid intake...with all the energy my little body could muster i began to cry and shake....the already familiar sound of voices showed my kin, knew i was awake
after being fed i had the strangest feeling....my padded diapers had something smelly they were concealing!
after another tear session all was right....clean and content i smiled at those familiar faces generating delight
i had the urge to exchange grins with them....i didn't realise it but i was a budding gem....laughter bubbled to the surface but i couldnt imitate them then
feelings locked up unable to surface.....many facial contortions after but it was all worthless
i was an inferior being....all hearing all seeing but never speaking!
searching in my brain for the ability.....but to remain forever seeking

When i was born a lack of air had damaged part of my brain tissue.....i never knew talk.....but i know i'll miss you
taken for granted YOU cant miss what u never had.....but 23 years on speech still avoids my tongue i cant help but feel sad
Textual writtings help me ink out my emotions.....but sometimes they just well up and i feel potent
anger eats me up at these times....so i try to stay clear of people and channel my thoughts into rymes
sign language only express so much in my world of silence....sometimes my fists turn to anger.....in this life of violence

i AM posting...mad shit has been
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"Listen, take this book, and make it your life
let it guide you through the darkest of night's
shake through your site absorb in your mind
and play a tune inside, until the end of time."

"are you retarded?" mike never even started
listening to that hypocritical christian garbage,
so-called knowledge, so he walked passed
that beggar in the grass, munching on scraps,
not a hope in the slightest, to get a life back
he strolled fast, deep in this park that bleeds,
stepped to a man, asked, "yo, listen please
hook it up, with some of that weed" a breeze,
hit his spine, didn't know that weed was pcp
but he was lonely, toked it right in the open,
hopin' to escape from drowning in emotions
little ocean, he stared at the broken', weird,
a noise pierced his ear, it was all he could hear
"god is the only one you should fear!" rocks
rained from the sky, air replaced the ground, die
he felt like he was to fly, he slipped with caution,
and floated into a solid, burning, rock bottom
blackness erupted his brain, twisted minds pliers,
and he woke up in a pit, of endless bitter fire,

mike was 16, with only a puppy and a family
that night he smoked some weed, well pcp
and ended it all tragically, he passed that bum,
walked up the creek some, and made a stop,
at the cliff that overlies an endless bed of rocks,
we hope he at least thought, no one knows why
he stepped without wings, and attempted to fly,
then he died, you might think all was well,
if hadn't confined himself to silence.....

he might not have ended up in hell..............



>open your ears< DaMn...That'Z WoRd^

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WORDS THOSE ARE^^^

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vote-fgee

DOPE BATTLE. thats my main point. I really enjoyed fgee's becoming a baby for most of his piece, and it really got me more than Sand's uber sad PCP story.
There was more material behind gee's, but I still enjoyed reading both.
check out my topical with Lyricali
Peace

DaYuM ... oDd ... 1-o...hiM...

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AiNt WoRdZ^


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close battle but i just loved what fgee did wid this topic,,, dropped a bomb fosure 1st and proberly one of the only times ill vote against sand,,,,, even tho his shit was illll as useal n all,,,,,,, but for me fgee stole the show that was an ill content

DaYuM...0-2...ImA LoSeR...uP?


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