God's Army
 

This is one of the first Gospel raps i did 3 verses witta chorus
(try and picture this to a ruff beat. Like Symphony in Xmajor)


chorus:God's Army rise up sinners get ya minds up//
u got two seconds to buckle down(echoes).....times up//
In this battle with God dawg u losin//
Squad up satan aint nothin but a big confusion//

v-1

Squad up stand front lets get back to the basics//
satan we don't need you get back in the bassment//
if it's not God then its just aggravation//
mess with Defgospel find ya back where ya face is//
no replacements for God you'll get crushed witta lyrics//
i was sent by em to crush weapons in ya spirit//
i rep for Jesus we'se the illest on da planet//
stompin with diesel sneakers leavin satan in a panic//
u a immature beast aint tamed yet we trained vets//
you can not defeat us hasn't registered in ya brain yet//
reppin for two gods NO ur not gonna make it//
we blessed just check the baugettes in the bracelet//
i don;t like to diss other rappers in da game//
Regime comin full force puttin emcee's to shame//
i don't envy the game we spinning the game//
if we get 10 minutes of fame we reppin Jesus's Name//

Chorus:God's Army rise up sinners get ya mind up//
You got two seconds to buckle down times up//
this is God's Army holy ghost music//
Squad up Satan is just one big confusion//

v-2
now its gettin lethal ya'll cats is see through//
i'll get evil Jesus see's satan in you people//
ya soul needs to be cast out and im gonna reach thru//
take the eveil out and put the good in you//
u runnin with the devil BELIEVE IT he can get beat to//
droppin flamin bars and im a show you what this heat do//
Praisin God flyin on ya land like bald eagles//
leave ya head spinnin like Shots from yoshimitsu//
Holy ghost gats bust Christian slugs//
aint no love in the world we miss dem hugs//
tryna mess with the Kid ya'll sickened souls//
keep it up God's grace is gonna miss them thugs//
strap ya boots arm ya self with the word//
what u mean God aint comin man bump what u heard//
somethins absurd Xquizit runs with the Lord//
keep bumpin God's music and keep sons on da floor//

Chorus 2x

v-3 who u know could rap for God and make a million hit records//
make a sinner convert in a quick split second//
im spittin raw like a playa never spit before//
it's the feelin of a bum who just got 20 chips or more//
if i stopped praisin the creator of the heaven and earth//
i'd lock myself in solitary to my lesson is learned//
witta bible by my side on my knees 24/7//
and writin these spiritual rhymes my sprititual weapon//
u talkin bogus im not listenin to the words that you spit//
u soundin silly and stupid just like banner and flip//
let me switch back rap for the mizundastood//
satan 's rollin on ya back and we gettin em good//
god aint in ya plan to suceed you bound to fail//
u in a cadillac strapped gettin slapped down to hell//
you live by the gun you need God as ya supplya//
to bring greatness thats why the squad is so fire//

chrous 4x


what u think?

i didn't agree wit yo views and i don't like gospel raps1 i did however like the rhymes, complex in places...liking that and felt the flo. Overall:I think your talented, not liking the concept...
jus being real wit you...good shit...
Return da favour
~1~

^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^same^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

but as far as your flow and shit, it was o.k, wordplay and vocab were good!

DON'T SLEEP CATZ!

i'm not the one to really read this type of rhyme i thought it was an ok flow ith some godd wordplays but it lacked punches in my opinion but your new and will get better

u wack nigga
u need to emulate tha converses of tha bars.
be creative

Born2flow: whats the deal, you diss everyone saying they are wack, link me to some of your work and see if you are any better!