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When Potts is on you got exception listenin skills /cause I throw lines and hooks like professional fishermen wield /whats isnt the field/ I predict what you didn't reveal /I'm like a homeless psycho cause I'm bout to move in for the kill/ pay attention while I lay my next line/ ain't but best rhyme/ but easily still beat Ja rule in a race against time /I'm fast and I'm furious/ before these cats get curious/ fuck tight cause I think my ass is impervious/ I cant seem to put this L down/ I must be hell bound/ but did the bell sound /I refuse to be held down /its time now to relieve the stress/ after I rip you team to screeds/ run the fuck home with your tail between your legs/ I'm not one to snooze on/ the only way you can play me is if I step in some shit while I'm takin a piss on your tombstone /get rolled on like a coffee table/ ain't no use tryin to stop my strongest blows bitch they all be fatal /I'll smoke a pound of weed no doubt in deed /the kinda bud that I'd be lucky if I found a seed /shaqs family wouldn't over stand be/ it can't be/ I got your ass working on your last chance with a plan Z /cause see the difference between me and you/ I keep it true/ and your doing this shit just to please a jew /so go head and pimp walk you punk ass down to ASCAP/ while I keep shitin you for comin out of you mouth with them wack raps/ so cap that with your gat and get capsized/ I'll zing zag through the flack/ and rip this track while you flat line /all that’s left is a battered cadavor/ on to the next cat that I'm after/ proof I'm gone like abracadabra

umm that was alrite
make the linez into proper sentences........so its easier to read
do not try n rap gagnsta take my adivce and u wont get hated on
next time try n spit on a topic


hit my shit up
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=54179

yeah, thta got difficult to read at some points, it was aight though.

Keep working on it!