tRiLL (1-2) vs. Philo (2-0)
 

Check in's by Monday
Verses by Tuesday
Voting ends Thursday

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Topic...
If I only could

aiit lamo at my self for sigin out and signing back in...................
fuck it fuck if my record looks bad..........atleast i never lost to any herb
..........yo i'm down for this topic

yo i'm checkin in......philo good luck

ain't nothing wrong with your record man....
you just gotta keep fighting...
it's all about elevation...

I'm in.
Peace and I hope to see an I'll verse from you.

my computers fucked... the interent isn't lasting for more than 3 minutes...
I can drop tomorrow as soon as I can access a different computer...
thanks fer understandin....
Peace

umm is that a legitimate excuse...................hello any mods.....please peep this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!
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yo i didint see ur extention being granted........
and in ur otha battle i saw that the otha guy didnt drop so it was considered a no show..................
i aint dropping shit until things are sorted out

na philo is a no show,,,,,,,,,,,,,,come on some one close this or tell me whats goin on........................................
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right so im a no show because you HAVE dropped a verse?
I was just being real about it.
but fuck it anyway.. don't have time for this shit.
I'm droppin' pussy.

If I only could...

If I could only open up my heart, and see through my mind
I'd live inbetween, while I redefined the lines
learn that struggels take time.. so I can justify the cause
achieve morality through my means... search for worldly truths in laws
life's a rush so I just pause... I'd survey the situation
I won't ever be complacent, so I remold manipulation
here comes the stipulation... I must fall and I must fail
I'll go against the current, but fall and drown to no avail
why can I not sail? The wind is there it just confuses me
twirling from the inside... observers can't see how it bruises me
I don't care for what I used to be, and now my mirror's full of lime
a man's made up of his experience.. guess I forgot to pocket mine
and if forgetting is a crime... surely I'm guilty of intent
I changed, began to climb... that was really a descent
I'm so caught up on rent, I believe I'm a utility
you can buy my soul... again... a repeat product of futility
where is this ability... to do? to think? to be?
worthlessness loses meaning, when I wish I weren't me
will that current cease? or can I make it? ... I'm no good
If I could only have one wish... I'd wish I only could...

-Philo

apologies for the lateness

aiit i just saw this.,.......i'll be dun in about half n hour to an hour......i'm a key this up quick

dun and it only took me 26 minutes........

Look at this world, all i see is death destruction i'm devistated,
Kids slowly becoming, criminals dealers & uneducated,
There's no way to change-this,
I wish i could....
Go back in time and rearrange-it,
So our lives wouldnt be in danger,
Our existance dont depend on strangers.

But not all men are evil there are wingless angels,
Who take off the arms of real life strangles,
Sure everyone's point of view is a different angle,
Sure the sun can breach thru
if the black clouds are removed,
Inspiration can reach u if the
stacked situations are improved,
i wish i could just...
Show my appreciation, to the nation,
of lives that devote they lives not to neglect,
those who oppose evil, takin care of the old and feeble...

Times are harder, for a starter,
life isnt taken for granted, join the dark side to
get yours dismantled, delicately it should be handled,
mistakes are made prices are paid,
i wish i could....go back in time
Prevent poverty, to stop robbery,
High figured bank satements, late payments,
Prevent death, so lives would be left,
To stop war n destruction, to
stop them gats from busting,
So much chaos just over 21 centuries,
The devil's plate must be plentiful,
All i wish is to go back in time
and do all i could........

got to give this to Philo
just came with an overall iller verse.....nicely told dope flow and good vocab etc
trill it showed u only took 26 minutes man......if you'd spent more time i'm sure it would have been iller......still was a decent read and the story was good.......not quite good enuff though
vote-philo