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Hail Mary ( remix)........
(....this shit aint got nuthin to do with ja rule...or 50 cent........)
......Makaveli lives.....killuminati all through ya body, i'm goin blow like a 12 gauge shotty.........uh, feel me......... ..............20 03', hail mary til we d-i-e, show u what im about anga buildin up inside, la da da, nananana ...bitch ima killa come and push me my lyrics bring da sweetest feelin mext to tappin pussy picture ful clips unloaded, pacz scriptures bein quoted to be the greatest in da rap games my motive bow down hearin god, tellin me to listen lovin him, committin sinz still hopin ima christian now pay attention, rest in peace uncle im ur ghost in these murda fields, hail mary stop me if i go letz go deep inside my solitary mind, ima madman who seez in da dark angelz lurk, enimeies, start to bleed, activate my hate, to degrate, feel da same tight grip, fallin clips, now im feelin pain some say my brain is all kurrupted fucked up n shit stuck, bitches is screamin when we bust up they clit plus, mama told me neva stop, til i spit out dust fuck the world.........itz jus me i trust.... itz just as well hail mary......... .........20 03, hail mary is da melody, summonded here now, swear i wasnt me inside....la da da da, nananana ..standin next to me was staked up promise breakers neva realized da precious rhymes dat lil ol me was makin institutionalized, craved a life a stardum, made me humble but to guarded for a trail, and to save me would i crumble .........free fallin push me uncle please, keep me ballin, can i touch the door hiway seventeen i hear ya callin, but not no more hail til i sneak bail, i aint scarred lyin wounded in mybedroom, am i dead i got a head wit da truth in it, what will i do what life to choose, what should i do, just true n' true on a one way trip i've risin, summonded up we all trapped up in this prision, life of thugz to my homeboyz sippin yak, doin they shit raise hell in these real hitz, now fear this when i turned out my light, i stilln saw in the dark thuggin eternal to my heart,now hail mary fucka......... 20 03, hail mary til we d-i-e, show u what im about anga buildin up inside, la da da da, nananana........... (copywright 2003) |
...this lookz a lil fucked in text....but if u think about it to da beat.....it'll sound betta.........uppin fo sum feedback.........
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Yo man this was Nice , , I was feelin ur content , ,,, Nice shit man , i'm lookin forward to read more Open Mics from u.........Return da favour http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=54967
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^^^^thx...........still uppin..........
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It's too similar to the oiginal you jus' kinda canged te odd word here and there.......not really a remix
keep it elevatin tho........ g'luck |
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Pretty much my views as well. |
That was aiight.
das shit was lyke 50 pages tho. |
.thx 4 tha feedback.....still uppin...........
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too much like original.........
plus, make ur own concepts |
why remix shit? this isn't
no pdiddy this is the remix lets change our old shit because we are too lazy to make new shit.... do you see sand dropping some...."the silent cries" ReMiX Yo!.... didn't think so..elevate your flow |
lol@remix...
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wat insprie said.......only i did the good remix............lamo any one remember that MANY MEN parody
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^I do and thats the best so far.
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I make Remixes.............But I only make remixes to songs that I made..........I dont steal other rappers original song and remix it.....I remix my own songs......If every1 liked my original one , then i would Remix it
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Not feeling it and TRILL you did the best remix
Your many men was funny as fuck |
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