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redragon 06-08-03 09:17 PM

Diss to smoky dro
 
Sem is over, youve been seen twice like things 'Belemics-Eat'
Youre like 'rips' in 'clothing', cuz your rhymes dont 'Seam-Complete'
you impotent fool, im not a 'rookie', i got 'wins' under my belt, everything you 'got's soft'
you could be killin 'boston ballplayers', as far as im concerned you still aint knockin 'sox off'
Sem's a 'bitch' without 'Danger' and 'Im-on-His-Schemes'
How can you be'Sematic, when you dont even know what 'om-in-ous' Means'
our last battle i learned why 'Sem' is a 'bitch: Cause hes 'NOT Liked Anyway'
'Despite-Him-Being-Gay' He Leaves his profile blank, Afraid of what 'We Might Say'
'Sematic-U-Lack-Son' I roll with 'savage-fac-tions' that persue with 'ravage-act-ions' to flip on 'any mc'
Fuck a gun…I'll toss you 'drinks from the bar' just to have 'shots' thrown at your "knees"
I’m like ya ‘Mechanical pencil’, with ‘each click the led sends’ out 'rewriting ur scripts'
I’m igniting with clips…you n winning wont happen like 'Bloods uniting with Cryps'
I gotta 'New-DIss', You stink and it sticks to you, like 'Glued-SHit'
You claim im 'New-to-This', you 'clue-less', but wait.. arent you the one thats 'Crew-less'?
^^reply nigga ~1~ uppin for feedback

A2Z 06-08-03 10:52 PM

this is reasily ya best drop, and thanx for changing the red color

redragon 06-08-03 11:15 PM

uppin&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&

snap 06-09-03 12:54 AM

hot spit dragon..wsh i kould praise....lol PEACE

redragon 06-09-03 12:57 AM

uppin********************************************* *******************************~1~

Kapone 06-09-03 01:17 AM

good werdplay

but imm a critic, and ima break this string of love

do you know what half those werds to werdplayed meens?

savage factions?

ravage actions? so you trash, and violently pummel actions huh?

wow, ur the first one////

theres more, but ill just leave it at that

LunkHead 06-09-03 01:31 AM

nice lil drop there. good diss. had some real good wordplay. the only thing is...who were you dissin? it said smokey somethin as the title but you were sayin sem alot so i got kinda lost........but yea..nice drop

redragon 06-09-03 01:36 AM

there ws some typo's man*********************************************** ************************************************** ****

LunkHead 06-09-03 01:49 AM

ok...i understand...............could you peep out my shit


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=55645

thanks man

redragon 06-09-03 02:36 AM

alright,will do later********************************************* ************************************************** ******~1~

Conflict 06-09-03 02:41 AM

dawg that shit was tight, your opener n everything was consistant wit good punches

redragon 06-09-03 02:43 AM

^^^good looks fam,thanks for the feedback ~1~*********************************************** ************************************************** ************************************************** ************************************************** ********


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