feeble minded vs sandman
 

iight 8 lines nothin more nothin less
you spit first cuz im goin to sleep ill be back on tomorrow night after rehab around 7:30 or ill post while im in school
take your time
no editing or biting
no d/r hata or crew votes,
5 votes win no ko

o yeah must explain, Quote lines and give constructive crit, so we know what we did wrong, and why whoever loses lost, thats how i learn from my battles and elevate, it aint too much to ask.

yo
im a step above you...'practicing' giving 'brain'...is the only way you can 'master' 'minds'/
i blow you away...like stepping on explosive mines, the imploding kind that'll break ya spine/
i put 'holes' in you...like the first 'dick in your ass'/
you ready to pass, my 'religion' is rap, and ya starting to 'fast'/
im on fire...see the blue glow under my name?/
you ignited the flame..you must be 'handicapped'...cuz your style is 'lame'/
i'll pull an 'internet matrix' and 'dodge verbal bullets' while shooting then back/
im cutting you slack, not even calling you whack...but i produce more punches than ur entire label in just this 1 track/
dont feed.

thats 8 lines match. hope i came hard enough.
(spelling mistakez)

first of all there aint no flames on ya name, its highlited in blue, tha flamez are juss bout as hot as you,
and its above not below, nigga shoulda used your potential, its like tryin to win a battle wid instermantals,
you should have came harder then that, when i take effect, now imma split ya back and break ya neck,
driving by have you screamin Hit tha Deck, your girl is juss another Hoe Down,
ill drown her wid my cum, so much nut her mouth will get numb,
i could crush you wid my pinky finger, and flatten you wid my thumb,
your verse was whack and dumb, so if you wanna start beef step up and ill serve you some,
your out of your elements, imma give you some defeatable tendencies,talkin bout suicide when any1 mentions me..

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comeon nigaz dont sleep on this. .................................................. .................................................. ..............

u sure u beat me? dawg dat was lame sand man, come harder, it wasnt yo best........

vote feeble............................................ .................................................. ..

Goin on the sheer will of propriety,
I honestly admit i felt it more from
Sandman, but something about the
unusual #of lines he requested & some
of the rhymes lead me to speculate that
he might of pre-written it.
I not too comfortable bout it,
but Vote=The_SandMan
The last line won it 4 u man,
good closing

Peace

i thought u 2 were meant to be good
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hmm....
uppin>>>>>>yall know the winner...you tell me by voting who won...........hhsdhsdfhsdfhsfdghksdfhksdfhksdfhksd fhksdfhkgsdf

Ok .............FEEBLE i noticed one thing... you used your first 2 lines in my battle............ cept you changed them a lil bit.....
...........but.......FEEBLE are you feelin Ok? i mean honestly you werent even battlin.........This shouldnt even be a battle cuz I KNOW you can do MUCH..MUCH more than that... but ... i gotta say that SAND gotcha on this one dawg... he kept punchin you were just Braggin bout how good u were..........
if more explanation needed just holla
NO BEEF
vote= Sand

yea its fine dawg. uve voted for me befor and against me. and no im not feeling aite lol. im tiread as fuck. i want a rematch against this cat.

yo ..good battle good battle.. i cant vote though cuz Feeble is in UT as well so.. sorry bout that..

yo sandman-- u seem like a someone who knows bout rap.. so plz check my battle vs lilbrick and poll vote on it.. thankls...
read the verses carefully...