My past, Suicide.
 

here's a shot of a true fucked up life

listen 2 the words I'm puttin in shiznit,
Don't end a life It'z not worth it listen 2 me,
I'ma drop events most recent 2 last.,
I'ma show U peeps my fucked up past,
All the linez I drop R strictly the truth,
That gives em the power 2 hit like Babe Ruth,
Age 15 a Degenerate Youth: in a scrap I got unlucky and got shot,
As I lay on the concrete bleedin all I could think dahm that's hot,
Age 13 The Potential Thug: I land my ass in jouvey for assault,
The worst part of it was the fight wasn't my fucking fault,
So I spent 30 Days of my life locked in a cell,
I got stabbed in my back but forced 2 remain in hell,
Age 11 Starting of A Chronic: I lit up my phattest fuckin blunt,
Age 4 Innocence lost: My fucking Babysitter made me lik her cunt,
Age 2 Evil is Planted: I witnessed my father beat my mom,
14 years later fully grown and forced him 2 bring some,
These events fucked me up till all I could do was cry,
Then after that phaze all I wanted was 2 Die,
I got a gun and loaded the clip,
brought it 2 my head and my finger wouldn't trip,
I donot believe neone should commit suicide,
I didn't and since birth lifes been one big mud slide,

Remember no matter how bad it gets shit'll get better don't let it eat at you cuz then it shows weakness of the soul and with out strength ther your dead already.

>^<- Fingaz ->^<

dam a sorry bout what happen to u...no offense or anything but man i think thats sick was u said bout:

Age 4 Innocence lost: My fucking Babysitter made me lik her cunt,

thats sick man foreals....but anyways hey this was very deep man alot of emotion projected through out nah mean...well keep doin ya thang and keep ya head...pz and much luv

reality...
truth...
life...

thats what this poem is about...others may think that talking bout ur past in ur poems are over rated...FUCK THAT...releasing those kinds of emotions are strong concepts of a good poem...

i really liked this man...u really put up a lot of emotions on this...

yeah i remember u talkin bout this shit on ur pm...guess shit always happen when u least expect it...its just surprising cuz most of the ppl i know would probably even tried to kil themselves..i know ur right it aint worth dying...commiting suicide are just the effects of being high on life ...

this poem is damn....i liked this a lot...post some more ..ill definitely peep em aight..always put ur head up !

aight thx alot I will have new ones posted every couple days the pen dosn't leave my hand less I'm sleepin, fuckin, eatin or dead, and I 2 ill for death's touch so I'll be around 4 awhile yet.
thx shiznit as always lotsa luv.

And pray for them better dayz.

dont get me wrong i aint tryin to insult u but if tha shyt is tru thats some wild shyt man, i dont even kno how to feel for u but u right, after hearin tha it make u think all your troubles aint shyt...

it is true feel however u feel u should and this is only the things I feel comfortable with. but I figure the words'll leak from me burn the page, then burn mic, then burn into everyones ears as they hear it. But I doubt my shit'll ever get 2 the radio lvl but it'sworth our best shot 2 B the next Generations Revolutional Leaders

im not sad for u im happy that u feel that way not u just a fucked up person

fucked up fucked up fucked up fucked up

im finally at 80 20 more to go yeah

hey man i liked it dog, and i hope u feel better cause u had a bad life but u got rymes doe hit me on the rebound the shit was nice.....................................

thx peeps I enjoy readin the responce and yes jokester I am a fucked up person