CarsonJet Vs. Feeble Minded
 

15-25 lines max....
no dik no krew no hate votes
no time....Jus drop when ur ready
no who spits first..we're real C's here
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good luck...

go check my battles out wit warlord, zainy and east syde thug and i'll hit this back up!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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aight droppin now....gotta crew battle to tend to....
yo chek it//.....

yo i dunno if yall heard da truth bout dis feeble//
He exchanges verbs cross battle lines,CJ be labelin dis illegal//
Nada like dis bitch, dere be no predacessor to dis sequal//
CarsonJet peeped ur shit...He kno's he aint frontin wittan equall//

Not good...
Set's a big plate for u to eat when CJ kno's a level is 1 below yo//
Take to much of dis verse..feedin in time...but be carefull what u swallow//
Chokin sparatic spews of vomit..i spit venemousley..now let my trap run thru till ya blood follows//
Callin out all ya bitch hoes, when feeble done set another one up..i hit em up like im frum sopranoes//

oh yeh...
U need to take a break i understand ur ryhmes need ta be re-fueld//(re-fe-elled)-pronunciation-
Not mine, when my lines stop my words go on like i rollin dis Verse on 20"er spre-wells//
Knok u out like trinidad tryna fuk wit dis heavy weight vet like im lewis//
My whole crew fuk u up, u an ur whole U.T, niggas be done askin..How da hell did they jus-run-on-thru-us//

Peace....
Take dis negative(-) message turn it up side down an it still is what it is//
CJ..fukkin ya 22-4 record up feelin ashamed like he be murderin kidz//
Go bak to work an dont forget to tightly snap da lids//
Ur Rep was movin quickly till u started fukin wit dis, now ur shit smokin up wit heat-sinkin skids//
ur outta tread, the shops closes nigga, ur dead, u dun blown a vic in dis here thread//
Only way i ever claim ur a hard ass heavy weight to CJ...be if i injected u wit liquid lead//
Terminaly ill, take a dose of sudafed...get off da compute, fo ya mom noticed ya skippin schoo an ask why yo ass be outta bed//
CJ be done wit dis weak mind...Confused it to much like Xavier in Xmen//
Came at me like u was Barbie but i dun Fucked u like im ken//
A Loss I serve to U and a vic i steall from u an Repent to da whole RB who know's dat half ur lines be Full-o-pretend//
give it 24 plus another 7..ur status will sum-day ...may-bay mend//

next//...

Alright i know this battle is gunna be really tight.........Wont forget to hit this up...........................Waitn for Feeble yall.......................
.........Check this out if you can..............http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=55678

yo vote here then i will do the same on dis battle http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=55396

yo...
your rap 'elements are intangible' just check out your sig-na-ture/
i'd eat ya...but this mans to full, the hos-pit-al would have to configure-ya/
my illness is spreading like the black plague...you must be vaccinated/
your vastly-hated, im the last-that-made-it, you rap-in-prayer but my raps-are-bladed/
you stuck-behind, if ya 'gave me brain' you still couldn't 'fuck-my-mind'/
you aint a friend-of-mine, if i was a level below you i'd just bend-the-line/ (the line that separates me from him)
you aint ready to fight-me, im not to be taken-lightly/
a heavy-weight..my light will blind-you-brightly/
im steadily-murdering-kids, putting carsons body parts in containers and readily-snapping-the-lids/
my-mother-forbids, but im putting ya body parts on ebay and making-the-bids/
you should be ashamed to battle-me..put ya verse in the bag and give it back-to-the-dollar-store/
CJ's a dollar-whore, when he spit his verse i gotta wonder...what did i follow-for?/
you expected to write a sick verse...im here to inform...it didnt work/
i wreck-it in no-time, with this-curse, my rap illness, killing with this verb/ :fuck (lol)
you pretend-to-battle-me but we all know your not-my-equal/
the end-to-splatter-me?...not when i 'wrote-the-sequel'/
i have no-remorse while 'killing-carson', 'spitting-flames' while 'committing-arson'/ (flames=arson)
you far-son, from being able to compete-with-me/
im ya rap-god...now come and 'clean-my-feet'/
ya verse sucked...if i could i'd be internet egging-it, the yolk would run down ya stumps where ya legs-should-sit/ (i burned them off earlier)
you cant cheat-fate, at this-rate, your-trait, will be to meet-gate, before the age-eight/ (meet gate= going to heaven when i kill him)

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sik verse...tight battle...glad we could meet up for this...good luck...let the votin' commence...may da best C take dis shit..

great great battle....very close.....almost too close to call, so ya know I'm pullin out da math equation...lol

Carsonjet
Flow:8.5
Punches:8;.5
Wordplay:9
Complexity:9
Vocab:8.5
overall:43.5

Feeble
Flow:9
Punches:9
Wordplay:8.5
Complexity:9
Vocab:8.5
overall:44

thats my vote....good battle...props to both.....carson..can u give me an honest vote on my battle with Lilbrick...but watch out...he said I bit his lyrics which is bullshit...so just give a fair vote..thnx

thanks yo..that was a nice verse from you also..made me step up a lot more than usual..props this is gonna be close >>>> uppin dfjkadfjadfhjafjfgbf

ima gonna go wiv carson on this but realy close, both tight verses but i just thought carsons punches were harder!
vote=carsenjet

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lol....thanks for vote but read Feeble's sig!...i will peep ur battle wit an honest vote ...nuttin less...thanks for peepin this tho.

thats my vote....good battle...props to both.....carson..can u give me an honest vote on my battle with Lilbrick...but watch out...he said I bit his lyrics which is bullshit...so just give a fair vote..thnx

Both of yall voted on this faggot. Feeble minded was a hate vote. CarsonJet you didn't vote cause i called your name in my rhyme dont trip. All of you guys are not rappers you GUYS ARE FAGS....hahahaha DO SOMETHING BITCHES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

And feeble minded i can't believe you would step to that level....i actually liked you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! SUCKA *FREEPOST*

enuff of dis...bitchity bitch bitch bitch free-posting...i had respect for dis kat even tho i didnt really kno him...he can go fuk a duk now for all i care......an o yeh on a finla note...dont use ur sig line in ur verses u recyclying biatch....

on a lighter note....uppin for votes