~!caught a kase!~
 

I caught a case that put me in a brace life’s hace blind from the race

kicked up dirt im hurt no smurks to lurk the jerk behind enemy lines I cross my mind showed the sign

it showed me satin hating thinking im relating but time is blatant absent minded got u having ceasurs but not shaken

trapped in suttin not speaking blood leaking no girl for freaking im seeking but not a missile to be heating and seating its creating the way you thinking

scorch ya eyes so you cant blink, fill you with air then u sink its a jinx

and uncertain close the Curtin im hurting I don’t wanna show im afraid the people will raid me with questions that put me in a daze past life phase with a wrath of furry keeps me past my place with shades I lays for days

keep insanity for a blessing and the energy god gives me but devils decreases as I deceases with diseases im non exsisnt cause I cant see or be me u clown me but its not funny

no passion im to incompetent for competition cause I ravel it swollen in a mosh pit chaos when I spit get used to it im katastrophic bullets I dodge it put it in a collage it so I know that my life aint a maragige pic

and im not dreaming life’s threads aint seaming the conductor of all wrist to gleaning mind spinning lost and mixed im underrated and u clock me till 6im underestimated u wanna battle but say im to complex in a vortex of death nuttin left........................


What u think uppin for feedback,don't sleep ~1~

damn dawg, that shit was tight...multis i think is the best shit to get ya flow goin n you got it

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this was very nice...truley loving the multi's in this...nice vocab,flowetc...uppin this shit cuz this is hot.
return tha favour on the link below...vote on who has the best verse.

me vs. Killa D
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up^^^^^^damn sleepers..........WAKE UP god damn !~one~!

This was alright.You did have alot of multis though I will give that to you.It is best to say this rap real fast or slow?

uppin^^^

this was not too good
you had multies but
they were atrocious.
elevate. i think i say that
to everyone. we all need
to. work on your content
as well. it needs touching
up....

help?

Sand of Night


aim ^

thanks for the honest feedback,thats all i want to see uppin^^^
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