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shiznit 06-09-03 03:58 PM

the questions
 
the questions

If you see me walking the road with someone else
It's not because I like his company
It's because you’re not brave enough to walk beside me.

If you hear me talking about him all the time
It's not because he pleases me
It's because you’re too deaf to hear my heartbeat.

If you feel me falling with someone new
It's not because I love him
Because you're not there to catch me fall.

If you feel lost, I too am nowhere
I too don't know where the road is going
Are we gonna cross each other's path
Or just completely turn around?
Will we just let go of what we had
Or go to the place where love is bound

Don't let me walk with him
It's you I want to walk with
Don't let me talk of him
It's you I want to talk with
Dont let me fall for him
It's you I want to fall in love with

Xxplicit_Dezire 06-09-03 04:55 PM

im feelin' dis gurl...
was really cute and u showed
alot of emotion on how u feel
about tha guy u want to be wit.
well nicely written gurl!...pz and much luv

shiznit 06-09-03 05:31 PM

thanks a lot....

well this one is basically the gurl talkin...

glad u like this one

up^

Legendary 06-09-03 06:02 PM

You are such a good writer. You don't do the typical rhyme thing everytime when you write. All your stuff is different so I always look forward to reading what you come up with.

This was really good. These little writings you come up with pack a lot of punch in them ;) I don't really know what to say about this. I haven't read one like this before. You always come up with a topic no one else writes about or take one everyone has already written and do it so much better. That's really all I can say about this.

"Don't let me walk with him
It's you I want to walk with
Don't let me talk of him
It's you I want to talk with
Dont let me fall for him
It's you I want to fall in love with"

That's my favorite part right there.


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