Loneliest knight
 

This is a R.B.T.L verse didnt get much feed back so tell me what you think, i lost this the opponet was surreal who mad it into rb legend with his verse,
The knight had dreamed of it ever sice he became a page,
This is what he really wanted, thought fuck the minimum wage,
For the first time in his life he was about to go into combat,
2 Enemys facing each other,archers shot,knights held back,
The captain signalled for the archers to fire than to attack,
The yung knight ran into battle swished his sword around wildly,
his horse was hit with an arrow fell down looked into his eyes mildly,
He watched and saw some of his best friends many of them died,
He jumped onto the ground pretended to be dead silently he lied,
He was the only one left looked scared and lonely in his blood pool,((kicks off new story))
Simpson looked up form the dead body he had tripped on and loaded another body onto the mewl,
Some of the other battle seargeons looked on him as courageous,
Some thought his braveness was triggered by psycotic behaviour,
Next time he went in he was shot asked whether he was allight and he lied,
ANother time he went in he was shot again he refused to die, another man criednew story kicks off)
Help me cried the lonely 6 year old little boy,
Amongst the rubble he reached for his smouldering toy,
It was on the edge of a forest in the war torn vietnam,
The boys skin was was slowly peelin off from the napalm,
He didnt know why his parents were layin dead next to him,
He would never never find out why his skin was dripping from his burning limb,

Hit me upppppppppppppppppppppp

already read this so i'll just UP this thread for ya............

UPPING FOR TREACH

yeah uppin for this shit..........................................