Trapped In
 

Verse:
I'm floating in the ocean,
Exposing secrect notations,
Exposure to history quotations,
Triggering angry emotions,
See through my mind, my skin's translucent,
See me glow in anger, like my skin's floresent,
Are people that stupid, or is it just ignorance,
My intellegence artifical, then so is my existance,
Evil never wins, then why is it so persistant,
Status is high, but expactations are lowered,
No respect to the church, but pray to the lord,
Keep Ticking twenty four seven, like clockwork mechanism,
Multiple emcees digested due, to high metabolism,
But eating raw emcees? tendencies of cannibalism,
It's like I'm trapped in a Prison, my own mental prism.

Chorus:
I'm trapped in a Prison,
My own mental prism,
instinct's rythm,
beat's not with-em,
I'm trapped in a Prison,
My own mental mental prism.

Verse:
Looking at the future, but i dont see visions,
Beliveing in beliefs, but not into religions,
Let people choose my path
but not choose my decisions,
U can steer the wheel, but not my car,
Serve me as the tender, but not control the bar,
Flow with the water, but not decend with the fall,
Run into bricks, but not collide with the wall,
No two people are the same? then why do twins look alike,
Violence is never the answer? forget people, why do nations fight,
Peace is the solution? Why is there decreasing population,
Lower the pollution? forget sunlight decrease the CO concentration,
Hatred is forgotten?
Sacred land is wher lives are constantly fought-n,
cause the real heros to be forgotten,
The shell seems perfect, but internally the apple is rotten,
It's like I'm trapped in a Prison, my own mental prism.

Chorus:
I'm trapped in a Prison,
My own mental prism,
instinct's rythm,
beat's not with-em,
I'm trapped in a Prison,
My own mental mental prism.

Verse:
Face the aftermath? How about planing before that,
Follow the shown path?
How about finding ur own way, filling in the gaps,
If we are all assesed on our negative actions,
Then good deeds should be written in captions,
If everyone's dropping gems, The world would be wealthy
If everyone's growing stems, The world should be healthy
If god loves ugly, Then the beautiful must be praized
All children are angels, Then how are these devils raized
Correctional facilities? or longterm torture chambers,
Arsenal weponary? or triggering terrorist danger,
The Struggle will be lost? But we're still figthing,
Peace reached at a cost? Then why are we still firing,
Trapped in my own world, a break-out is hopeless,
Strapped in my own world, how will i cope-this,
I'm trapped in a Prison, my own mental prism

Chorus:
I'm trapped in a Prison,
My own mental prism,
instinct's rythm,
beat's not with-em,
I'm trapped in a Prison,
My own mental mental prism.

yo i tried a different approach to hip hop.......just tell me what yall think i'm out for now................

Trill the best part was the chorus
The hook was bangin

.Trill.
 

The hook was hot... I was feelin' this joint though. Madly uppin' it. You always have hot joints though.

the hook was hott as Eng, said, but i was'nt feeling the verse too much...

aiit thanks..........i tried a different approach to hip hop...this is a but complex.................UPPING
mnao the hook isnt that good

damn...fuck what they say, I was feelin the verses. it's so...fucked up...like saying something, but then turning it around and saying the opposite and they both mean thye same thing. it was really dope dude, great approach. and it said some good shit too.
great fuckin work trill, dopest shit I've read in a while
Peace

The hook was hot the verses ill. Hot shit trill. can ya give me some tips on how to spit good. IM still learning and i enjoying doign this but most of my shit is whack. and help would be great

tight

this was straight up ill
the hook and the verses were bangin, thats all im sayin,shittt
yo trill can you peep my new piece "loss of love"?
thankx

get over the hook.....lol.............can any one drop comments about the VERSES PLEASE

yeah shit was dope different style for you abit simmilar to say sands peices, nice drop dawg

thanks.............

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lol...what the fuck is this about?
just wonderin... looks like you goin crazy... flow was good... most things on point... rhyme scheme was average... i can see i must have half inspired you with this... lol...
"My Ocean" - By inspire

I'm floating in the ocean - Opening Line By tRiLL

OR... it could all just be one coincidence...:rolleyes:

coincidence......and dont look at me liek that......i just needed a startin line....so i just statred with taht..........u didnt not inspire me inspire