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Dadi Kewl 06-10-03 12:10 PM

Mentally ill.
 
This is writeen in 1st person as if i'm conversing with myself.


how long have we been locked up in it
I feel the plot's up the moment the spot's up and doc's drugs finish
I guess they don't see 'Pac thug image, mob-ster vintage
It's been 24 hours since the cops done visit
Dawg, they think we lost it, fa'real..I ain't crazy,
Shady maybe...but still it's awkward to deal
Locked inside giant doors and behind iron bars
Re-enforced firewalls that's where they pickup my dialogues and discern 'em
Hold up, here comes the nurse with the surgeon
They're conversing, we're sure to get a needle squirt in the sterum.....

((Get's IV fluid and Blacks Out))

Partna' wake up, you've been asleep, dawg, for hours
Judging by the shadow alignment it's time to move our feet t'ward the showers
Leaky faucets and a rust covered sink,
I've seen enough blood to think this place ain't safe enough for thugs, fuck the bing
Every hour on the hour catz is roughed up the same
It's nothing short of breathin' ether, these people fuck up ya' brain
But not me, I've been here 49 hours
That's twenty-eight hundred minutes since they brought me, borderline cowards
Damn, I miss my service with Nextel
Better more I'm never bored when there's Ruth in the next cell.....

((Blacks Out))

Add, wake up and peep fast-quick
I've made up a complete tactic
It's a way to break out and be free, bast'id
Our 72 hours is concluding,
You're making me start to lose it,
We're here forever, playa', stop the confusion
Remember, Central Park is a cemetary now, people are getting buried now,
All thanks to the squirrels and constant laughter from that scary owl
But whatever - C'mon, partna', just hear me out
The minute hand is moving to the 12, in a second we'll be nearly out..

Dadi Kewl 06-10-03 01:09 PM

Why does every1 sleep

Upp

GrYm StYlE 06-10-03 01:16 PM

Flow was good
descent content
Overall 7.7 /10
10ne

Bmack 06-10-03 01:17 PM

Nice joint here...I was liking the whole first person perspective thing...creative. Upps

Dadi Kewl 06-10-03 01:54 PM

Uppin

Nonsense 06-10-03 02:06 PM

yeah...............dat was nice..................i was feelin it........................I like the whole "first person convo" shit...........................it was hot......................8/10....................keep spittin........................

Dadi Kewl 06-10-03 02:47 PM

Thanx yall

up

~RuThLEss~ 06-10-03 07:41 PM

Nice too see how creative someone is love the contend i have to say this deffinitly hot

FAM......nice drop


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