::::When the mic stops:::: (Freestyle)
 

::::When the mic stops:::: (Freestyle)

when the mic stops, we can end rappin’ in parking lots...
forget about hyped up drops, be sociable with NYC cops...
cos when it stops, were all gonna be nobodies, that’s right...
haters are gonna be filled with delight, all we can do, is be polite...
cos we no longer have anything to recite, nothing to excite...
the days of spitting are gone, our emotional status will be withdrawn...
no longer will we wake up at dawn, make up raps about the front lawn...
just to indulge our fantasies, about rappin’ and freestyling with famous MC’s...
no longer worry about length keys, and impressing striking Femcees...
Freestyling is now dead and buried, the weight is lifted we once carried...
the game we married, has so gruesemly lay down and died...
after we OD'd and cried, we were made to pick a side...
us MC'S are up against the tide, we lied about being depressed and dejected...
'Pac and B.I,G we no longer respected, our needs and pay were carelessly neglected...
Humiliation we were infected, like AIDS the scares never fade..
Although we were made to spit, it got us paid and sometimes laid...
were gonna continue to drop, until doomsday - when the mic stops...


--- got bored the other night!

uppin'

very depthful here rhythmic...i thought it was interestin the whole way through and was structured well but you needed to incude better vocab. Nice piece
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thanx..uppin peeps..

Quick ill spit...I was feelin...wasn't surprised that it was hot...keep bangin

liked it alot

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wow this is like a BRE convenion.. lol.. I liked it, had an' a'ight flow.. you've never been arrested b4 have u? "be sociable with NYC cops..."... lol... but ne-way, the vocab was pretty good, wordplay was there.. 7/10 for a keyed verse it was pretty good..

nice peice but I seriously doubt that's what happens when the mic stops lol, nice insight though.. OoNnEe

this was a nice piece to be explaining a rapper and everything.

thanx peeps

This was Tight
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