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G~Code 06-10-03 06:27 PM

somethin written for an x girl i tried to get back with
 
Verse 1]
Light the camel watch it burn, ash the ashes from the cherry/
I'm tryin to not to care, but all these cares i try to carry/
Bury me, i'm gettin deeper, escapin is less likely/
My whole heart is ripped apart just cuz somebody liked me/
Strike me dead, dear lord, right here on earth while i'm kneelin/
Heaven's gotta heal me cuz this world ain't shit at healin/
And I'm feelin kinda shitty, pray for answers to the questions/
But I fear nobody hears me, and my faith just starts to lession/
I'm stressin to the point where the stress just overtakes me/
Shakes me, breaks me, makes me mad I gotta break free/
Rip the chains, hack the shackles, tackle, snip the veins/
Dismiss my pain, refrain from lettin it get too strange/
Its an insane world, and only the crazy are the sane/
I'm playin the game, but some start sayin my name/
I'm gettin in too deep, i'm makin it way too hard/
I need a little space, to place and play my cards/
I look to your eyes, cuz i know no other strength/
I've never met a girl who would go no further lengths/
I never had a friend who was down to play them pranks/
So girl, a second chance is my way of sayin "Thanks"/
[Chorus]
Girl, you could hit me, hurt me, make me feel good/
We could fight like petty people, or make it real good/
I could love you till the end, or I could prance/
Its up to you, you got my heart, //one last chance/
[Repeat]

[Verse 2]
Through the dark of night, my dreams are filled witcha' beauty/
Mental pictures of this cutie, wish you could see what u do to me/
See, if the sun may bring rain, a rainbow rises and towers/
But only if you're strong enough to wait through the showers/
If you can't stand the rain, then you'll quit quick/
But if you hang on strong, true beauty you'll witness/
Through sickness, through health, through place and time/
I promise if you let me then I'll make you mine/
I promise if you're cryin I'll have the hand that you hold/
Just like when we're drivin, and I'll keep you from cold/
If you fall for me, I promise to catch you/
You wanna be with your friends, girl, I promise I let you/
I promise to hold your heart, if you promise to trust me/
And I promise not to shave when i know you like it scruffy/
I promise to treat you like a queen, quench every thirst/
Satisfy your needs, and always put you first/
I promise never to break any promise I make/
I promise on the real that I'll never be fake/
I promise to strike, ignite, and then light up your life/
If you promise to be my only fan when I fight/

[Chorus]
Girl, you could hit me, hurt me, make me feel good/
We could fight like petty people, or make it real good/
I could love you till the end, or I could prance/
Its up to you, you got my heart, //one last chance/
[Repeat]

Don't say a word, just listen, close your eyes so you can see me/
Shut your mind off, listen to your heart/
I'm feelin like i'm fallin, and i'm fallin all to easy/
Give it time, and we'll never grow apart/
When I'm away and I miss you and I'm cravin your face/
I'd throw away every other flavor if u gave me a taste/
Your soft lips, hips/ on my back and i'm topless/
Scratchin on my cross'n lean in for a soft kiss/
Eyes closed/ Cuz if its a dream i'll keep sleepin/
YOu make me so strong, but still u make my knees weaken/
And I'm keepin every picture, so I can't forget the times/
You woke me from the couch, damn near actin like a crime/
We're not perfect people, but this feels so perfect/
With you i'm priceless, but without you i'm worthless/
I curse shit and get mad, hit walls in bursts of anger/
But I'll always keep you safe, and protect you from danger/
make a love that can't compare and show it off to the world/
And if the world doesn't like, then I'll fight for this girl/

[Chorus]
Girl, you could hit me, hurt me, make me feel good/
We could fight like petty people, or make it real good/
I could love you till the end, or I could prance/
Its up to you, you got my heart, //one last chance/


tell me what u think ... get to see the softer side of the g

G~Code 06-10-03 08:27 PM

so no one is gonna give me an honest opinion about this shit or what

Accelerate 06-10-03 10:51 PM

----touching story
yes i was touched

it was a good drop, it does hit the heart and shit, in a way that this was a good song, and presents a good chance.
1

MeX 06-10-03 11:05 PM

emotional....a bit to emotional. Dawg dont get down over a girl. I mean ya there great and all but there nothing to fret ova. great drop

G~Code 06-10-03 11:59 PM

thanks for the vote dogg still uppin this shit .................................................. ....... .................................................. .............................................

G~Code 06-11-03 12:24 AM

and once again im retarded dont mind what i said ............... i just want to hear more opinions esp from the females.......... as to what they would think holla

west 06-11-03 12:34 AM

Yo feelin tha drop dawg,i know where u comin from and am fellin tha shit,need a collabo jus holla.

Peace

G~Code 06-11-03 12:50 AM

thanx for the positive feedback .......... im gonna be busy for a few weeks so i dnt got time to spend on collabo but hit me up if u wanna do something when i have time to concentrate on it .. ill be down .......... if u guys would hit up my battles too people be sleepin

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...?threadid=56082

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...?threadid=56082

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...?threadid=55335

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...?threadid=55937

G~Code 06-11-03 06:42 PM

females i need to know what u think about this............ please let me know your opinion and what i need to change...

EnVy Ny 06-11-03 06:56 PM

dat was good shit man im feelin dat............................................... .................................................. ......keep it goin

PleDge 06-11-03 07:08 PM

taht was really touching really...altough getting caught up in girls is something ive never thought men did....you dont imagine it..well n e of the guys ive went out with n e ways lol....but serisouly try to pick yourself up ad move on....if yous arent together.wasnt meant to be...ill drop

G~Code 06-12-03 12:25 AM

ite i have been moving on i just want to keep it on good terms u know and that was on my mind so a wrote just wanted some advice on it thats all

Eviley 06-12-03 03:40 AM

awesome i really liked it..........stay up!!!1


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