STATEMENT---> where we stand!!! --> DON'T SLEEP!!!
 

treason--> reasons for seasonal heathens to release beliefs.//
impede leagues of rational minds, it's tha rapture of time.//
races passin' they prime, expired faces traced to hatred an' crime.//
replacement of lives with blind faith an' artificial intelligence.//
it's official, irrelevance of position can't hide from gueided missles.//
forced to rely on pistols, listin' insults in-hopes to avoid bein injured.//
deploy seeded minions, just sheep on tha hit-list in my opinion.//
for in tha beginnin' god created a mirror image, somewhere it twisted.//
somewhere our script was re-written, printed a second edition,//
meshed in with malice yet open ended, why we accepted the challenge.//
defected an' inflicted pain ta gain what? a loss-a balance?//
stage fright if you will, enraged fights, even killed, the cost of talent.//
toxic gallons, acrostic symbols of power shower our atmosphere.//
still detached from fear, latched to evolution, evolved polution.//
I see no solution, just a rapid conclusion, detrimental preminitions.//
visions of cancerous syndroms, micro-chips injected thru suringes.//
I'm living witness to this forced opinion, which forced inscriptions.//
this your only hope, it's important you listen....

hook

I'm showin' tha world thru my eyes
bestowin' emotion thru my rhymes
truth in my lines spoken before our demise
time's drawin' near as problems arise.

yeah thats the shit right there

ummmm.. yea, can I get some constructive criticism.. 1 thx ne-way word, but I'm lookin' 4 more than that.. like try to think about the meaning, 'cause there is a topic if you think about all the wordplay and meta's.. 1

That was pure not a single filler. very depthful and you was ontop of tha rhymes, vocab and flow. Very hot shit, liked reading it.
~1~uppin this

it seams mainly like a plee to make people open their eyes

pretty much, it's my view of the state of the world right now.. if you look carefully it talks about all forms of corruption from pollution to propaganda, right on to mind control thru "suringes" which is a meta-for television.. 'cause it's basically injected into us from birth, or "fed" to us... 1

don't SLEEP... can't you read the title...

well you did have good word play and un like most of the people's stuff I read on here you actually have a rythem to your shit... like someone could read it and picture a beat. Nice work. You Had pretty decent vocabualry... you dont need a whole dictionary in all freestyles... you played it off nicely. Good Work. OoNnEe Love

Wordplay was great Topic Good
Very vivid i was digging this peice from start to finish
10ne

seeeen... good lookin', Angelic.. I ain't even have a dictionary, str8 from the head... lol..

yo your shit was kinda tigh i felt it. it flowed pretty well too. keep it up.