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AuQ WuRD 06-12-03 02:22 PM

- Stage Fright -
 
This Is A Hot Track....SHow Some Love.....I Expect Some Feedback......This Is My New Mic I Just Got Yesterday......GOOD Quality...:D I Love Jay Cyph!!!!!!! Holler



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One.Bye

Peril Eyes 06-12-03 02:46 PM

Thank's For The Shout Out ..
..To Bad No One Is Actually Going To Hear This .

Now, Onto The Constructive Critism..

Your Flow Is Weak throughout The Whole Peice..
You Slur Most Of Your Words.. Get Up Add Emotion..
Quality As Bunz ..

Content Was Alright .. Multis Came In Kind Of good at
Times, But Other Then That They Was Pretty Basic


Do You Really Like Me That Much, You Have To Mention
Me Three Times In A Track?

Quote:
Posted By AuQ-Wurd

I Love Jay Cyph!!!!!!! Holler

swizzerve 06-12-03 03:51 PM

u need more emotion... u also needa make ur vocalz a lil higher...
cant really comment on ur lyrics cuz i didnt understand half of it... but the hook was pretty good...

AuQ WuRD 06-13-03 01:56 PM

Ok.....Fuck U Jay Cyph......U'r A Bitch....And I Will Make Sure To Kill U In Our Battle!!!

Peril Eyes 06-14-03 12:55 AM

You Say I Come Half Assed..
So Be It.. I Come Half Assed And Still 10 Times
Better Then You Full Force.. You've Yet To Actually
Seen Me try On The Net..


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